Nice little story good.

Not bad, not bad at all, kinda cheesy and corny lol but it worked. Poor Ryo...but the to hell with him! Rukato all the way!

I was a little hesitant to read this at first, but the ending was worth it. That battle was pretty awesome, and some Rukato in the end as well! Good work!

Was that a Spider-Man refrance

Cool! Takato is a super hero. But no offense, CRAP sueprhero name. But then again, its hard to make a good superhero name. I would've gone the Iron Man route and say "Fuck it secret identities are too mainstream"

why does this chapter remind me of spiderman 3

Can you write a sequel soon I loved this story!

the summary was bad and I almost didn't read this story but, I'm glad I did

Friggin AWESOME! BEST DIGIMON STORY I'VE EVER READ ON HERE! I hope to one day read the sequel. Till then this is Bubbajack sighning off.

Woah talk about a shocking chap! So Takato was pretty much undaed this whole time since both parts of his soul were out of his body? Damn...AWESOME!

Damn, you sure know how to end a fight! Friggin amazing chapter to an amazing fic!

This is not looking good for Takato! He beaten battered blood and bruised but he's still alive...But at this point I think he might be better off dead. Nice chap. This is usually the part where a miricle happens right?

Shit Takato is in for it now! He just survived that last fight by the skin of his teeth so I can't wait to see how he pulls through this next one!

Well now THIS is gonna be a tough fight! I look forward to the last few chapters!

Dang you actually made me feel sorry for the badguy! Very few authors have managed to do that so good joband great chap.