short chapter ... and so many errors, writing in the 3rd person is getting annoying

Wow! Such an unexpected ending! I loved this story thanks for writing! Xx

Why did I reread this horrid fic? So much pain and angst and I knew how it would end and I still reread it. It is horribly depressing and insane with a little bit of love somewhere, just to make it hurt all the more.

From a technical standpoint, I find it quite well-written.

Harry is a little cunt.

Hi! My username is LifeWillBeGood. This story is beautiful. Even I didn't understand half the stuff that was going on, it clenged at my heart strings so brilliantly.

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really.

REALLY?

I would kindly request a new heart, please, since you just broke mine without repair.

But Ron and Hermione gave him birthday gifts...

Your authors notes are always so funny

I kinda dislike the story for the horror that Harry has been through, but it also heals me that Harry is getting better and that his godfather is back...

And I'm also intrigued by the plot, so I'll keep reading for now :)

alors j'ai toujours été angoissée du début à la fi de ton histoire. Mais quand j'ai lu ton dernier chapitre j'ai pleuré beaucoup pleuré: entre la mort de tom, la proposition de mariage qu'il voulait faire et leur bébé qu'ils ont eu!

You fucked me up. You done fucked me up. I was shocked and destroyed by this trash writing. Alright you don't just go around and write a fiction where harry is crazy and depressed the entire time and when he finally over comes all this and his love for Voldemort triumphs, you fucking kill Sirius. Alright that's what I first though. Then voldemort died and I cried. Man wtf. I'm a wreck. Take some responsibility and have a sequel where harry discovers volfemort made horcrux's. You got talent but you're a heartless monster who wants to destroy my soul. God damn it I'm crying again

well, good job wrapping that up horribly.

harry is acting like a 5 year old. this is just absurd. the dark lord should just kill him, harry is obviously not worth the trouble.

harry is a whiney bitch. either stop staying rude shit...or leave. jeez.

harry sounds like an idiot, not gory or dark etc. just whiney. make it stop.

you used 1437 times "..." in 90k. wow. please try to avoid that...