God, very sorry for Dean.

And then Dean took John by the shoulder, looked him in the eye and said, "it's okay, dad."

Gads. Poor John, Mary, Dean, Sam. I want to wail, too.

Wow. That was so powerful, so disturbing. I can't believe there aren't more reviews. I want to say I love all your supernAtural honestly, I think this is the best fanfiction I've read in a long, long time...

Whoa. Wow. Oh, so intense and I swear I am blinking back tears. I need a hug! ;_;

Fantastic writing. Really packed a massive punch.

GN

Awsome story!

Wow that was very powerful. Very well done. I think that John woulda been something like that in the weeks/months following Mary's death. I don't think that John handled his grief well at all...and I think that he just kinda turned off feeling to deal with the loss. But I do think that he did what he thought was best...maybe it wasn't right, but it was the best he could do...Great job of getting into his grieving mind. Very powerful and good.

*standing ovation*

Very well done. I loved this. Perfect insight into Dean's character, and even John for that matter. Plus, it almost seems as though John may have been the evil, at least in his current state. His grief clearly consumed him.

Thanks for this,

Emily

that was so good. it was so life like. wish it was a story instead of a oneshot, i want more.

That was really good. The imagery was awesome. And I really don't think you were out of canon.

oh...*more bouts of speechlessnes*

very angsty n dark, oh how very gloriously dark...

poor dean! he was what...abt four? man...tis was good.

Oh, poor Dean. And poor John. You know, I had drawn the same conclusions about John that you had. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

Stunning and tragic. Please add more to this little ficlet.

I'm not sure if you intended to make me cry but you did damn you. That was so sad. I felt so bad for little Dean. anyway good job.