Why and how and...why is this not continued? I mean, yes, it's been ages and you probably either forgot about this or lost all motivation but...dude, this was one of the most hooking, suspenseful and well-written first chapters I've ever read for this fandom and to stop there was just way too cruel lol.
Don't know if you'll ever come back to this but I just wanted to say you really have something awesome here and being able to envision your Jackson and Lisa so perfectly and clearly in your writing, is a testament to your writing talent. Here's hoping to see chapter 2 someday (and hell, all the chapters that come after lol); I would most likely abandon everything I'd be in the middle of, squeal and go read it!

Okay, yes, it's been over eight years since you've updated, but this is looking to be one mighty spectacular story! Motivation is likely lost for a second chapter being fabricated up by now, and that's quite understandable, but this is certainly a masterpiece (even though it's just a measly first chap, lol). You've got fantastic writing skills that I am envious of...sorry if that sounded borderline creepers...tehe

But seriously...I'd love to see a continuation of this. Great work.

I demand to know why there is no more to this!

Wow. It's been four years... I must say it's time for an update? Pleeeaaase... Haha I like your story.

whoa this is so great! why did you stop? keep going! update!

Oh wow..

I hate the cliffie! XD

I hope you continue soon. [:

HI, ERA DAVEN

I'M GLAD THAT I FIND YOUR STORY VERY INTERSET PLOT'S. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. THERE STIL MORE TO THIS STORY LINE.I CAN'T WAIT FOR BRING THE STORY OUT WERE THE REST OF STORY ARE.

P.S I RECOMMEND YOU TO READ OTHER STORY NAME OF THE STORY BULLET BETWEEN THE EYE BY THE BLACK PANTER

I love the suspense! I can't wait for your next chapter. Good luck on all your exams. I feel for you!

Yaay excellent chapter. Next one please?

wow this was a reallie amazing chapter! plz update soon lol

Keep up the great work!

That was awesome you write very well i saw everthing you wrote you have a wonderful ability to paint pictures with your words! UPDATE SOON!

Intense! Well written. Please keep going...

hm... curiousity gets to me everytime... Please update soon! Cant wait to find out whatll happen -

Oh im intreged. do continue. can't wait to find out what happens next.