| Reviews for Kuro to Gin |
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  Monse chapter 27 . 5/23 Yazoo x Tifa non |
| Sak chapter 17 . 11/15/2019 Dun dun dun |
| Sak chapter 14 . 11/15/2019 This was a sweet chapter. I'm glad Yazoo admitted to being inexperienced at kissing... And they got a photo of their kiss just omg! Cloud is gonna find it isn't he? |
| Sak chapter 13 . 11/15/2019 Yuffie and Yazoo's conversation came off as a bit... Weird and a little immature... I really don't see how Yazoo is in love with Tifa to be honest. And I love Loz so that might be interfering in my opinion |
| Sak chapter 12 . 11/15/2019 This was cute! Their talking was good but again I want more |
| Sak chapter 11 . 11/15/2019 Now Yazoo will run away, hurt by being reminded of who he is and then Tifa will find him detain and drag him back and then oops they'll kiss. Please? ;) |
| Sak chapter 10 . 11/15/2019 Yazoo is definitely the mumsy one. I imagine him staying an apron and cooking for his brothers and nagging at then when they bicker |
| Sak chapter 9 . 11/15/2019 Unless Loz dies then I'm going to continue imagining a love triangle where Tifa and Yazoo get together but she falls in love with the elder brother, gaah! |
| Sak chapter 8 . 11/15/2019 At least Tifa got a stuffed toy |
| Sak chapter 7 . 11/15/2019 A nice chapter Their interaction was fine |
| Sak chapter 6 . 11/15/2019 A big family trip plus kid friends! I loved the getting ready scene, reminded of living in my brother's house during my uni years with his 6 kids... Fun |
| Sak chapter 5 . 11/15/2019 Mmm... The flow wasn't entirely here for the chapter. But Loz is alive yay |
| Sak chapter 4 . 11/15/2019 I think it is the first time Yazoo thought of Cloud as his brother... |
| Sak chapter 3 . 11/15/2019 You're so kind to warn of the Yuffintine, it was very slight. Yazoo I was hoping was taller than Cloud but if Clouds old jeans are too long for him then I guess not. The card game sounded confusing haha! And if they played for hours then Yazoo seemed to catch on? Nice chapter |
| Sak chapter 2 . 11/15/2019 Yazoo! Please wash yourself before and especially after a dirty bath. Lol... Vincent the human washing line, good one! You've created a very nice image of their bustling homey home and Yesssd you mentioned Tifa's curves thank you? I don't know how one cannot write about them :) The chapter ended quite abruptly again, maybe a sentence or two about what he was doing (starting to eat?) Could have wound the chapter down. However! I'm not a writer in any way so that's just my feeling. I'm excited to read more yay! |
