Reviews for Operation Laptop
15animefreak15 chapter 3 . 1/14/2008
*super-ultra gasps* Koushrio-kun IS possessed! No! Please hurry and update!
15animefreak15 chapter 2 . 1/13/2008
Oh, now this is interesting. I wonder what's going on...maybe it has something to do with that flash of light? Hm...
15animefreak15 chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
Hahaha, poor Koushiro-kun. I hate it when people mess with my laptop, especially without my permission.
bobbyneko chapter 3 . 2/3/2007
SWEET!

this is awesome, i love it! and i really would love to see more, maybe you could update over this coming summer? *dont hit me- im a hypocrite i never update my stories* but yours is really really exciting
The Unknown Alias chapter 3 . 4/26/2006
WHOA! Plot Twist! Okay, at first I also thought a digimon was behind this. Then I was thinking along the lines of something from a different show. (X.A.N.A from Code Lyoko in case you're wondering.) But Koushiro? Either he really is possesed, or he created a faulty program that brainwashed him. Jeez. Tentomon will flip when he finds that out. If he isn't working for him already.
TheKuraning chapter 3 . 4/14/2006
O. Suspence. Cliff hanger. I bet it's going to be a happy ending. With Digimon, it's usually always a happy ending. But why is it only Iori? I mean, why not have Hikari or Takura go in, too? Yamato and Taichi would be really useful, especially with Omnimon, but they would come in at the last minute... hm... many different directions to go in this story, eh?
Circeus chapter 3 . 4/14/2006
I have to say this chapter was highly confusing, both in events and pace.

-I can't make any sense out of Koushirou's explanation. beyond the whole digimon analyzer program, his computer computer doesn't have any particular link to the digital world, as far as I can remember.

-There is no explanation given for why the digimon would be suddenly afraid of human

-It's a bit unclear what is going on while Iori and akeru are talking, too (at some point, I though they were still in he room)

-Why would they hold such a thing in a chemistry to begin with? Wouldn't a normal classroom or an auditorium be more appropriate?

Sorry I seem to be all vindictive, the plot sounds interesing, but it's just being told a bit confusingly.
Uta no Himitsu chapter 3 . 4/14/2006
0.o Intresting.. isn't Murmuxmon from the frontier movie?.. Anyway good story update son..
Birdboy chapter 3 . 4/13/2006
Tatetu... that a reference to dub-Daisuke's "T.M." comments? XP

I'm hoping it manages to keep its amusing tone as the world stumbles into danger. Still quite well-done, and I'd be hypocritical to complain about update pace.
Kayhera chapter 3 . 4/13/2006
Ah, not aliens! Just Digimon! XD

Yay! The speculation is over! We know it's this evil Digimon! Ah, poor everyone...except Daisuke and Taichi because they're just stupid. But that was pretty amusing... And an evil Koushirou is amusing, considering my friend and I like to joke about Lucemon having the same voice caster as Izzy (Mona Marshall) and since Lucemon's evil and Izzy's all, um, not...yeah. Er, I should go now, but still looking forward to an update! It may be bizarre but that's the entertaining part. It's better than lame :P
Circeus chapter 2 . 3/27/2006
The overall thing was very nice, but I have to say the random appearance of "davis" in this chapter was weird.
The Unknown Alias chapter 2 . 3/26/2006
Hmm... And here I thought it was just going to be a lot of humor. But now! Suspence! By the way, I want to see more of rooting through Izzy's files alright?
Kayhera chapter 2 . 3/25/2006
Ahh...this one was rather odd. But I guess that was it's charm. I'm going to ignore the fact Iori was in Takeru's class and continue to speculate on what could possibly be wrong with Takeru and Koushirou...I say it's aliens! *waits for Mulder to show up to save the day*
Birdboy chapter 2 . 3/18/2006
Wait... why's Iori in Takeru's class?

And quite interesting. It might take a while, but I'll wait...

(It'd be SO amusing if all this weird stuff ended up with evil digimon impersonating Takeru as a plot to sabatoge Koushirou's laptop/rule both worlds, with the first chapter being as it was.)
Kayhera chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
Aww, how cute! Considering how I can never find a good Digimon fan fic I really enjoyed this one.

Though I've always perfered Joe/Mimi. O.o

Some parts might have been out of character but for the sake of it being a comedy it didn't really matter. Love to read more from yah!
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