Shinelilac3

Beautiful and touching.
I hope to see more of these two. There's really little about them however Hilo is the only and most influential in kenshin's character after him natural then tomoe

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Awwwwwwwww...#3

I love it! Great story!

that was awsome! XD and cute.

Ah! I loved it SO MUCH!

7 hours, and he was only starting to get concerned? Oo

oh my gosh, poor kenshin, i hope he is ok. i love the story so far.

luv Faina

very nice! for your first "little kenshin" fic was great! it was so sweet! :D

loved it! It's always interesting to read Kenshin/hiko stories like that... Hiko always makes it an interesting read with the way he treats kenshin _ In the end though, it was really sweet with the way he cared for him... great work!

aw, kawaii _ their personalities are so different, it's always fun to see them interacting with one another. and i noticed you used the term 'gi pants'...well the word for them is hakama, if you didn't know . well all in all i'd have to say that it's a good story and i enjoyed reading it lots! _

aww... very cute.

What a sweet story. One of my favoites of the ones of yours that I have read. Nice to see Hiko being caring here. Somehow knowing Kenshin's future as the Battousai makes this particularly poignant.

I love HIko and boy Kenshin stories (Hiko and grwon up Kenshin stories too, for that matter). Boy, Hiko is harsh here. I would have expected him to at least look around once it got dark.

Awe, I thought this was so sweet. Hiko can be a jerk, but I think he really does care about Kenshin. I'm trying to write a little Kenshin story... but it's not going anywere fast .

I liked that you showed a softer side of Hiko, he's pretty cool.