I started reading this. And stopped.

Then I started got 2 sentences further and stopped again.

Then the third time I couldn't stop reading. I finished inside of 24 hours, I kept wanting to put of work to read and I loved this story. For a character that I've known for all of an hour I hate Grace. Lol fantastic story. Marcus was very believable I think, I would probably faint in all honesty.

I LOVE THIS FIC

I love this! It's a little off the actual story, but it makes sense and I'm glad you did it that way. The only thing I didn't particularly like: most people don't realize this, but Rowling has said that Remus' parents were named Lyall and Hope Lupin: Lyall worked for the Ministry, and Hope was a muggle he'd saved from a boggart while on a mission and later married. (See , Book 3, Last Chapter, Last Moment: Owl Post Again. Click on Remus to see what she's written on his character.) Also, the bit where he goes to the graveyard...the inscription on James and Lily's grave is actually: The last enemy that shall be defeated is Death.
That and I think you altered Kingsley a little, but it worked, so that's okay. You are a great writer...but you need a spelling/grammar checker (like microsoft word or something). I could see the story clearly in my head, though, and that's saying something. Keep it up!
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Hey! I just read this fic that you wrote a while ago and since I noticed you still write I thought I'd still write a review. I should have reviewed each chapter sorry. So, let's just say very simple: this fic is awesome. I started yesterday at 2pm, I finished it today (noon) I just loved it. One of the very best I've ever read! I really think I'll go check your other fics because this is really brilliant!

i know i am a couple of years late on the uptake, but i just read this and your story is fantastic! i could tell the entire time that you put so much thought into everything! fantastic plot, characterization, and originality! i enjoyed every second of it! thank you!

This was a really good story.(:

Brill story loved the imput Marcus had and was actualy quite an entertaining character. The whole story has been a life saver since i'm in the middle of my GCSE's so thanks and i hope you wright a few more like this.

I'm glad you worked hard and took time on this story. All the little details really came together in the end. This is such a great story, I hope tons of more people read it!

this is such a good story... i love remus and tonks, and in this story you really manage to stay true to their characters, which I know can be hard. good job!

xoxo

that was incredible... truly incredible... is there much more i can say?

Balaquer, that SOB! god!

remus is such an idiot. omg, could he get any dumber? (not just in ur fic, either, btw. a LOT of them .)

besides that, applause for tonks, tonks and tonks!

i love this fic!

Excellent story! Marcus is a good character. I'm glad he didn't get is memory modified or anything. I can only imagine the shcok when he found out everything. I was so glad when Remus finally allowed them to be together. He can be so stubborn sometimes! And love the dream he had in the end too. :) Nice job!

*Squeel* This... was... one... of... the... cutest... R/T fictions... on... here! O...M...G! *Grins like an idiot* So well written and cute and sweet and adorable and all that jazz! I was like "FINALLY" when Remus and Tonks kissed lol. Oh and the Order being all fanclub of Remus and tonks haha cute cute cute! The part in the graveyard was so cute! And of course the end, and... yeah most parts. Oh and when Remus cried when he thought he had lost Tonks. I was SO cute that Marcus was a bad guy! I KNEW he had something to do with the Snape thingy lol.

Anyway adding it to my fave list of course. Duh!

First of all that was just fantastic. The first LupinxTonks fic I've ever read...and it was just SO good. I squealed several times - That's right, squealed. A embarrassed as I am about it, I have to thank you for making my day that much more enjoyable.

Secondly, I love your explanation there in the ending note about why you decided to kill Tonks' parents. Made me laugh again.

I wish I could write more to tell you how much I loved that fic. Hopefully putting it on my faves list will be explanation enough.