As far as I can see there is only one mistake in this chapter: Guthwyn picks a mare but you say she mounted a "him". A mare is a female horse, a stallion a male and a gelding is a castrated horse.

Oh. My. God. The is my number one favourite part out of your entire trilogy. The emotion and detail you put into writing it almost want to see this in the movies itself. Damn you're an a amazing writer to create this.

Best Lord of the Rings Fanfiction ever. Because you kept not only your character in character but as well as the others in the book. Congratulation.

:D ;D Still EPIC! Thank you

Ooooooh my gosh! So this has to be the 10th time I started reading through "The Rohan Pride Chronicles" - or maybe it's the twelfth? Hmmm, I've lost count .

Anyways, I am a huge fan of this series and in my opinion, it puts all other LoTR's fanfics to shame. I have tried reading other fanfics and it is utterly hopeless. No other writing can compare! But I stray from my initial point, I wanted to say that even though I have read this story over and over again, I still feel extremely nervous and anxietious during this chapter! It took me a few hours just to finish the last half! I had to take breaks just to sooth all of the butterflies in my stomach!

It astounds me how your writing can make me feel such anxiety - but that just goes to show how amazing your skill is. To feel what the character feels - well in Gùthywn's case, I doubt I can come close to what she is feeling during her unveiling - allows the reader to connect with them.

It is truly a remarkable and at tge sametime, nerve wrecking experience that I keep coming back for over and over again!

Thank you for the links! It made it a lot easier.

I liked part two a lot, but I feel so bad for Legolas every time she still saw Haldor and Legolas similar when truly they are extremely different. It saddened me when she wouldn't give Legolas a chance giving into pride, prejudice, and fear. This last chapter have me some ease.

oh my gosh part II! I figured since the first part was update this past september that you hadn't posted part II yet but low and behold, you not only have part II but three and an epilogue as well :D

So over joyed right now! Gonna spend all week reading them 3

Kaida is pleased. :)

I think it's cute how Tun loves her-unfortunately, she doesn't love him back the same way. I'm enjoying the series so far mainly because it's different than most LOTR FFs.

What a blackmailer. Hmmpph.

Guthwyn is in so much trouble when her family and the Fellowship find out.

It's not time to despair though.

You're really good with the imagery and details :)

I wonder how Guthwyn will cope with fighting alongside elves.

SNEAKY SNEAKY SNEAKY :P I'm not worried about her because I know there are sequels to this story. Hahaha.

What resolution did Guthwyn make? Probably to fight :o