Reviews for Denial |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is fantastic. The dialogue is spot on and I was laughing aloud at Edmund's commentary. And Lucy's song - you're gifted in lyrics, I have to say! I've been writing for 8 years and I've never been able to write poems or lyrics in anything. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Peterly lies. Hahaha! Thank you for posting ) Lucy is delightful. |
![]() ![]() O, Peter, the King of Denial! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh very funny. Made me smile. Love Lucy song. The last time " I never was" yeah right. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing and the song was fantastic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah this was so fun to read... Peter being... NOT sick. Aha. Very clever, and it was so fun to laugh at his expense when he's being so sickeningly in control of everything and able to carry out his kingly duties, even when he's clearly not able to. And what a very clever song out of Lucy! :D Sapphireswimming |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww this is sooo cute. And really cute song btw |
![]() ![]() ![]() L:ove the song! Good fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() And THIS is one of the reasons I love Peter so much. Haha, Lucy's song is wonderful! Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this was wonderful- I loved your song! I can imagine Peter reacting like this when he's ill! |
![]() ![]() This is gold. Lucy's song - seriously, you are amazing. Absolutely perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, very cute. I can totally see Peter being stubborn like that! And I *LOVED* Lucy's song. Brilliant! ~Red |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL I love the last line, denial is Peter's strong suit apperently. I'd love to see how Edmund reacts when he sick, as I imagine it's REALLY not that much better. If at all better. He for sure wouldn't be tricked into taking medicean, and he'd be extra cranky. Thanks for writing, Wildfire |
![]() ![]() LOL, that was really cute. Made me laugh, I can just imagine them all acting like this, in a silly grown-up way. Great job! |