Reviews for Album Leaf |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry, but I think this one is sadder than Autumn Leaf. There they had a life with each other. Here they have NO life without each other. At least he did love her still. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was very sad, but also very lovely that Edward did what he said, and loved Bella even when she was old. I'm glad she had a lifetime, even if it was only her lifetime, of his love. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for sharing this story. You are incredibly talented. You captured me immediately drawing me into the story so I was able to experience all of the emotions that he was feeling as he remembered their time together. It was almost as if I was standing in the shadows of the room as he held her in his arms when she died or watching from a distance as they were together on the porch. This story made me smile and cry. Great job. |
![]() ![]() this piece was so beautiful...beyond words..u'r such an amazing writer..i felt really emotional reading this |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the sweetest most amazing fanfiction I have ever read. And to fit all this emotion into just two short chapters, amazing. You are a very talented author and I hope you continue doing what you do. -Marykate |
![]() ![]() that was one of the most gorgeous things I've ever read. you should be an author, because that made me cry. good job. swear to me you wont stop writing. |
![]() ![]() Nice story. |
![]() ![]() That was absolutely beautiful. |
![]() ![]() Wow. Not only was this an impossibly touching story, it was beautifully written. Please, continue to write these stories. I'd love to see what else you can do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Album Leaf was wonderful, but Conservation of Mass brought me to tears. Edward's point of view was delivered beauitfully and realistically I think. |
![]() ![]() ![]() all i can say is WOW...WOW...WOW this story was friggin amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so beautiful, I really hope you continue the story sometime. However I loved what you have already written it's a so different from what I normally read and much appresiated, thankyou for sharing your story. Meg |
![]() ![]() ![]() INCREDIBLE |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whts the day of reckoning? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story. Wonderful perception of the soul, and the 21g theory. You have captured the parting of one so amazingly. - T |