Your so right, Naruto has always been by Sakura's side so why not give him a chance, that's why I liked the couple NaruSaku, I love this story so much, I was so caught up in reading, I forgot this was a one shot...haha good work, I'll be sure to read some of your other stories as well..:)

good,good

... Your first? It was awesome! :D

One of the best angst fics ive read. You have a really great talent, you should consider working on books? Thats my goal in life XD

I am big narxsak fan.

The sorrow is a good part and it shows naruto never seems to loose his touch of helping others and bringing the best out of them.

good story.

Kinda wonder how long it takes until she gets back to her old self.

Great job!

cool xD

so nice! it's very good for a first NaruSaku fic :D _ hope you make more fanfics _

Nice drama filled story. I loved it. Almost made a tear come to my eye.

Great job on this one-shot. It had me squealing all the time, I really liked it.

Really good job!

eii.. youre good..!

This is really good!I totally love it!I'm not a huge NaruSaku fan but this is just awesome!

Hello chibiabi. Nice to read you...so to speak.

First off, I like the fact of how the story is bare, and then laid out bit, by bit. Most storys start with a prolouge announcing the author's changes/plot/etc. This is a more adult, experienced read, and I think its a rare art on the fanweb.

The brutality made me skeptical of this being a K fic. However, its basic, and never reveals anything too grusome. The tension was thick as well: was Sakura really going to let Naruto marry Hinata, letting him suffer with her "death" for the rest of his life? Nice touch.

Great work. It's stuff like this that gives me my fire to continue my own works.

Keep of Passion of Anime Alive Forever (KPAAF)

Bro

This was so fucking awesome (x2342143243)

I really hope you write more NaruSaku fics 8D

I'm really inspired to draw a picture for this fanfic

I love it... aww... they have such a wonderful love together but it's just so bad that she have to suffer so much... freaking damn Hinata's dad... but still, I love it.

absoulutly amazing. Very original and excellent writing skills. I look foward to more of your stories,hopfully NarSaku ones, and i agree with you that sakura is one of Naruto's most interesting characters.

You rock.