Simply great!

Wow.

Wow.

Just...

wow.

Practically speechless now because I love this so much. Wow. I love how you portrayed Jess and I pretty much loved everything. Wonderful writing. It drew me in and I'm probably still going to be thinking about it later. Wow. Again.

Wow.

I wish I saw this earlier; because it's wonderful. (I'm beginning to think they all are) Then again, had I read it earlier I wouldn't have been able to enjoy it so much a few minutes ago when I read it. That probably doesn't make sense; Oh well.

But seriously, it's perfect.

Oh, Ari. Have I mentioned that, not only do I love you dearly, but I have a complete awe and respect for your writing? Because I really do.

I just found this, I've been so, so out of touch with Gilmore Girls and fandom and haven't read fic for ages, but I saw your banner at s-h, so I clicked, and damnit, this was beautiful.

I love the structure of it. The use of the minutes, the things Jess would do if he was another person, the wondering what was meant to come after. I love the way that this is so very Jess, the structure, the flow of the words, how it all contributes to the general feel of Jess's thoughts, if that makes any sense. This is amazing, and it made me remember why I used to be so addicted to Lit fics.

And that last part was simply amazing.

so cool. great job.

i find you to be an amazing writer. you've continued to write fic after fic, no matter how many reviews you get. you are in practically every jess and rory C2 (i just added you because i just found out about you) but you have very few reviews for your wonderful work. i know this must sound strange, but i have this strange respect for you. you dont give up. im a giver upper(not sure if that makes sence) you are truly a one of a kind writer,

Dear Ari, this was amazing! Such a great idea and you did it so *insert choise word here* well.

And damn me to hell for not having slept enough that my head can formulate all the things I want to say about this after reading it.

It's brilliant, simple really, but so much more than the surface you see at the first glance.

Great job! :D *hugs*

Oh. My. Fucking. God.

You deserve an amazingly brilliant review to compliment this amazingly brilliant piece, but I am going to fail miserably.

-Just warning you. ;)

I honestly have no idea where to even begin, here. It's frustrating, really, how my brain has turned to mush. I can barely breathe, let alone think.

This is superb.

This is one of those pieces that you read that just sticks with you for whatever reason; well, not 'whatever' reason. It sticks with you because the whole idea of it is tragic and brilliant and it smacks you across the face like a rubber gloved hand. It sticks with you because it's so beautifully written; prose that flows so brilliantly that your jaw drops and you question your own grasp of the english language. It sticks with you because it's so detailed and intracite and it makes me sit here and wonder if you put five thousand, two hundred twenty minutes into this.

Longer?

It would've taken me longer.

Hell, it would've taken me twice that just to come up with this little gem: "Remembering need not be forever, dear your goddamn stupid self."

I'm holding onto that quote, deary. It's just to perfect.

This whole piece is perfect.

I just have to thank you for writing this, and for sharing it.

(It'll stick with me because now that I have read it, I can't imagine ever not have reading it.)

xx

nicolle

Really good, really suspensful BUT TOO LONG. Hard to follow and to read. BUT, I love the ending, I love the ending I LOVE THE ENDING.

Thank you, Cheers, Jen

That was awesome. I loved it. I love how you describe Jess' emotions because it's really hard to think what he's feeling, but you seemed to do it perfectly. This was just so amazing and I really did love it!

Interesting idea, with a lot of frustrated passion. I liked the style and structure. I thought there was a lot of forward momentum. This is a great line:

“He feels a pang, but it could be his imagination, or the corner of the book in his pocket digging into his back.”

Good work, thanks for writing it.