OH MY GOD I'VE SEEN THIS ON THE YULETIDE WEBSITE AND I'VE LOVED IT TO BITS AND PIECES.

LET ME LOVE YOU FOREVER.

AND EVER.

great read and interesting ideas! marla was underdeveloped in the movie!

wow, this is really really good, it sounds like it came right out of the movie/book

"I know what Marla is. I think." great line. i really enjoyed this fic, going more into depth about what marla means to him. your writing is excellent.

ME: very god. very good indeed.

JADE: so you gonna do it now?

ME: *groans* yeah i will ok!

JADE: hahaha!

ME: *sigh* i promised myself if i found marla fic that wasnt dripping in fluff but captured her essance i would upload my Fight Club fic tonight...

JADE: *laughing at me*

ME: so well done, you captured Marla's essance. put it on a page and displayed it to the world.

JADE: YAY! CEWL FIC! FAVED!

ME: _ ...alter egos...btw d fic is called My name is Marla Singer if u wanna check it out. Later.

fantastic. It's perfect Fight Club without needing a movie to accompany it. It's very, very good.

I don't have any suggestions for improvement, except for you to write more on it, even if it is supposed to be just a oneshot.

Keep it up.

-Soapy

Wow...This was really well-written.

I liked it.

Nice work.

Wow. I like it. The way it's written is very much like the book.

Cool. It seems wierdly... sterile, is it supposed to be? Like quiet depression, surrounded by anger that it doesn't understand because it would take too much energy. I like it.