| Reviews for Naruto meets Dnangel |
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   armysugakookie chapter 2 . 1/10/2014 I hope the ending is dark leave cooly...and Sasuke just had to ruin dark's awesome leave! |
| WicKeDLana chapter 10 . 12/11/2008 Daisuke seemed too soft, and girlish/gai. Like when he started to cry because of Dark's . I was expecting to see a bit of a fight between Satoshi and Daisuke, after the glaring. finally your story wasn't lively. I was waiting for something really interesting to happen, but that never came. now i don't want to be a criticizing bitch, but Your Story was DULL. Story line: Not Bad except for the last bit And the bit where Daisuke runs off. To improve: Read more stories, and then you'll get an idea of how to write your story. Worst bit of your story: your fighting bits. Best bit of your story: hard to find. something that remains unanswered in your story is: How the hell did they just travel from one worl to another? |
| EowynsPen chapter 10 . 11/7/2008 kool! |
| HiraHayami chapter 9 . 8/6/2008 This is initially one of the worst fanfics I've ever read. GET AN EDITER, GET BETTER AT WRITING, OR DON'T WRITE AT ALL! Sheesh... Do I really have to say that...? Oh, here's an example of your stupidity... "“Brother!” He pulled out a throwing star and launched it at the black haired man. He frowned and caught the star in his fingers." Okay... 1) Sasuke calls Itachi JUST Itachi, not brother, because he hates Itachi so much that he doesn't consider him his brother... and 2) THEY ARE NOT CALLED 'THROWING STARS'! They are Shurikan and the knives are called Kunai. Now, get a life! |
| HiraHayami chapter 8 . 8/6/2008 This story is horribly written. You really need to find an editer, ya know that? And, by the way, everything- even the fight scenes- are SO boring. And just so ya know, I'm scowling right now. Stupid Britt. I'm bored, so I'll continue to read this horrid story. -Hira-chan |
| HiraHayami chapter 1 . 8/6/2008 N... So I see. You live in England... Or some part of Europe, at least. If you want where you are to stay secret, you should be more careful. I can also conclude that you haven't touched high school yet. Well, anyway, I'm done Shirlock Holmsing (yeah, yeah, I spelled his name wrong on purpose). Nice first chapter... I guess. Right. - Hira-chan |
| Polish chapter 9 . 7/18/2008 “OUTSIDE!” All but Itachi shouted. -cackles- oh man thats hilarious! ahahahaha! Mean while after finally realising her son was gone…at the Niwa household… -CRASH!- yes it is possible to face crash your keyboard! oh man that hurt! their just now realizing this! I love this! its very well done! |
| ME chapter 1 . 7/20/2007 Very interesting, Minceo! Now to think of it, Daisuke and Naruto are sort of the same cuz they both have something/someone inside them. I like it! :) |
| Karichi chapter 1 . 3/10/2007 oi!u stole my idea 4 a cross-over w/ dnangel and naruto lol rofl ohwell ur story's difrnt so yeah now back 2 the story! ~nya~0 |
| call me ponyboy chapter 10 . 12/15/2006 i love it i love it i love it! my 2 fav animes pulled into one story, i love it( did i mention that?) |
| Rambie chapter 1 . 12/1/2006 Summaries aren't the only thing you suck at. |
| Celebrusc chapter 1 . 10/12/2006 wow this is good, keep up the good work! _ |
| C-heese -C-ake -CC chapter 10 . 9/10/2006 ... -takes deep breath- OMG! THAT WAS AN AWSOME STORY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE COME OUT WITH THE SEQUEL SON! Dia and Naru make a cute pairing. GO TOTAL UKES! WHOOT! |
| Ramona Takamichi chapter 10 . 8/17/2006 Wow! That was the most exiting, hilarius, greatest fanfic i've ever read! (n belive me, i ve read a lot!) On a scale from 1-10 you get a 11! / Ramona Takamichi |
| Galaxya chapter 10 . 8/12/2006 Great job on your storie, you are right about the ending being knid of short but oh well. I cant wait to read the seaquel. |
