Reviews for Sweet Seduction
SmirkJr chapter 1 . 5/23/2017
I came in 3 seconds. High score!
Orangesmoke5270 chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Ah- that was amazing. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
stofferz chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Aww! Teh fluff is too much for this fangirl!
Usui chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
Ow, this was great! Loved Doumeki! xD

Really good. ]
Spiegel chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
How romantic! Who knew that Doumeki had it in him?
Aoirie chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
CALL THE POLICE

IT'S GODDAMN FREAKIN' AWESOME!KYA~
blazingeyes chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
ZOMG!

THAT WAS SO AWESOME! I LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE!WRITE MORE!

luv

blazing-chan
Darkgreenfangirl chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
This was too awesome for words! (Yummy Doumeki in a suit...)

Donuts foreverXD
Azamiko chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
Yay! Much softer than most fics with these two...Cute.
Ahria chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
That was very nicely written. I really enjoyed reading it. _
vyravyra chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
nice...it was hot and it made my day. heheh
Rakuda chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
I have now turned into a pile of mushy goo! Ohh! This Donut fic just pushed all the right buttons! *SQUE!* So suave, that Shizuka! If I had a guy come onto me like that...! *gets dizzy* Wata-chan, you lucky man! XD Love this oneshot, it's cute and very sexy at the same time! Great work!
Reppu chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
That was so overly-romantic, but it pulled at my heartstrings and I loved it to bits. Thanks for writing it!
Kyia Star chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
I liked it. The only thing that really bothered me, is the second person POV, the flow is somewhat off. Something like this works better in first or third. First person because it's obviously in Watanuki's POV, but that would make it first person, really, which is categorized by the use of "I, me," as pronouns; or Third, because it looks like the author is sending out hints of what Doumeki is thinking which inches more towards third person.

Just my thoughts. It's still really good, just odd the way it's written.
Muffinizer chapter 1 . 11/13/2006
... Y'know, this is the first Doumeki-Watanuki story I've read and wow. Loved it. Not only was Doumeki really seducing (which, in my opinion, was rather scary, OOC, yet somehow... how should I say this? Hot?) but the fact that Watanuki-kun acts so girlish around him makes me laugh - I have this thing about voicing out the different parts for stories I read, but when I came across the restaurant part, I laughed at myself for being such an idiot and stopped. It was really THAT hard to say stuff in a husky voice. (... 'Specially if you're a girl. LOL XD)
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