Reviews for After the pain
Lerris chapter 30 . 6/13
This is pretty good, and really should be finished. Still it is a narrow favorite, nonetheless.
Uzumaki spiral chapter 1 . 9/15/2019
It's a shame that you didn't continue this...
RenegadeSon chapter 30 . 9/14/2019
Excellent story telling. I'm so engrossed with trying to figure out all the secrets that I want to keep reading more and more. I hope you are about to finish one day!
Midori Zuzucest chapter 3 . 4/9/2019
i feel these two can have a very strong connection.. she is like the right woman to naruto. i like them like this!
Midori Zuzucest chapter 2 . 4/9/2019
This Kyubi is very hilarious.. i kinda like him.. but seriously who did this to Temari is more than death!
Midori Zuzucest chapter 1 . 2/20/2019
Temarii... what the hell happen to her? oh no.. she like me a lot.. so do Naruto.
1529 chapter 30 . 10/22/2018
I'm pretty sure this has been abandoned, but I wanted to add my two cents... this story was brilliant for the first twenty or so chapters, but then it seemed like all of the characters took stupid pills... and Naruto took one for cowardice as well.

While the writing continued to be good, the plot seemed to take more and more contrived twists and turns to make sure that ignorance continued and not very intelligent decisions continued to be made. The latter plot has very seriously let down the wrong and the story this started to be.
lmoreno86 chapter 30 . 7/25/2018
Love the story. I was reading it when you first started it but i noticed you never finished it. I was wondering if you ever were planning on it.
Xemenon chapter 16 . 4/19/2018
Ok, I got it that you are one of those backflipping lunatics that think that abortion is the worst thing a human could do, but when your loved ones are raped and become pregnant as a result you run straight to the abortion clinics.
I seriously don't get you guys.
death390 chapter 25 . 4/4/2018
Oh this hurts, I have to drop this after it looked so good the amnesia arc in chap 25 was just no. Great au and wonderfuly written up to that point but you could just feel the difference in muse
AnonnymA chapter 30 . 3/6/2018
Wow! I am lovin this story. I know it’s been 5 years since you touched it, but I’m really hoping you finish it.

Here’s hoping..
Abby Godness chapter 1 . 1/11/2018
Sweet friend when are you coming back to update.? this story is simply amazing.. i really need to know what happen next..
Thejoker7813 chapter 30 . 1/9/2018
Update
Guest chapter 30 . 1/1/2018
Your amazing
Guest chapter 30 . 12/10/2017
Please update I love this
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