I know this story has been around a while, but it was only now I found it in the archive and am very glad I went through and read it. A very good story, I like your characters and chapter lay-out, using each episode as a base. Good story!

You couldn't have included Lee's letter?

But you forgot the kiss to his father's forehead before he left to the brig. That was the last thing Lee did in that episode.

It's funny how doctors like to keep their patients in beds longer than the patients like. I was once in the hospital for 5 days just so I could be hooked up to a machine for 1 hour a day. Drove me nuts, and it was most depressing, especially since it was the weekend and there was nothing to watch on TV, and I was weak as I was still recovering from major surgery a few weeks prior. I kept thinking "Let me go home in between treatments, I'll come back, I promise". Of course, given the seriousness of the condition I was in for, I had to stay in case a change in treatment was required.

I also love what you are doing with Ali. Bipolar Disorder (aka Manic-depression) runs in my family. I never see it displayed accurately or well in media. TV shows like to over-play it and give it a really bad rep. My mother's problems began shortly after I was born, and worsened after my brother was born, so I find your take on this most interesting. And your doing such a good job of displaying it that I wonder if you have personal experience.

Anyway. I'm enjoying the story very much. I'm re-watching the series right now on netflix and decided to check and see if I could find some fanfics that worked on the Lee/Kara stuff. But quickly decided I'd rather read about the Father/son relationship.

In a water crisis such as the one they were in, the only thing they'd be using water for would be drinking and ship functions (assuming there are any). Showers would be a NO-Go until they had replenished their supply. That's one reason why tensions get so high in a water shortage, everyone starts to stink, and then they have less to drink.

Sequel please tell me its coming along just reread this and really want the sequel

Is there any chance that you are currently writing the sequel? I 'd love to know what happens next :)

Great story from start to finish with some choppy moments and it wouldn't hurt to have some more characters, but i get its Lee centered. I hope you continue with this story there isn't many like this, so hope a sequel is on its way

Great story. I hope you get around to writing that sequel sometime soon!

Alright, so I love this story, a lot, it's actually my favorite for many many different reasons. The main one being that it has a believable K/L relationship. That said, now that the TV series is over, I hope you continue the story, cause with the ways you were able to twist and turn this story for season 1-2, I'd love to see what you do for 3-4. So I implore you, please finish this story.

gods, i loved this story!

so fraking awesome!

what a journey it was! i enjoyed every chapter, i don't remember a bad one.

I LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE! i love the way you describe my fave pilots, i love the ways you draw every scene, every feeling. you do it really really good.

I'll follow your stories wherever it takes me!

Please keep writing! :D

got to make a sequal to this story love it..

Awesome story Lee and Kara are my all time fav pairing

Wow, it was amazing from the Start to the End. I hope you will write a sequel.

I'm not sure if I've reviewed this story before, but I think I started reading a few updates ago. I had been hesitant to read this because A) I didn't like the idea of Lee being married to someone who wasn't Kara, and B) I was afraid it would be like the whole Gianne thing in Black Market, which annoyed me. But then I read it anyway and it was very good and I look forward to the sequel.