| Reviews for Stay With Me |
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   Shannonn14 chapter 1 . 1/4/2007 i love audrey/jack stories make more plz! |
| Backroads chapter 1 . 12/28/2006 No, not trite at all. I feel you really got a good hold of Jack. There seems to be a little too much summarizing of the situations on hand, but other than that this is good writing. |
| freelancer-babe chapter 1 . 7/29/2006 that was a nice spin on that episode ] good work! |
| BrittanyLS chapter 1 . 7/10/2006 I agree with you. There are not enough Jack/Audrey stories out there! Thanks for this! |
| Phia the Ducati Chick chapter 1 . 5/28/2006 Hey! I've literally only just finished watching the 12am to 1am episode, because we are much further you guys here, and I have to say your FanFic certainly fitted into the plot really well, I only started watching 24 at the start of Season 5 so I missed any Jack/Audrey bits, so this had made up for it. Phia |
| whiskysours chapter 1 . 5/25/2006 Beautiful. Really beautiful! |
| jordannicole chapter 1 . 5/3/2006 golly gee willikers! i sure do love it! and i agree, there's not enough jack/audrey fanfics out there. |
| Erin Elisabeth chapter 1 . 4/30/2006 This is so perfect! Jack and Audrey are meant to be. |
| slugsbay chapter 1 . 4/27/2006 You make Jack and Audrey sound so right together. You even managed to get me to like Audrey a little. Can't wait for your other work. |
| chezlovesyou chapter 1 . 4/26/2006 nice piece! each week I'm becoming more and more and audrey/jack lover! thanks for posting this! |
| Tigerlily Brown chapter 1 . 4/26/2006 That is really really good! I love how you kind of elaborated what they actually showed on that episode. Very realistic... and touching :) |
| Puck and Rachel fan chapter 1 . 4/26/2006 I love it. I think if you can think of more to do with this story you should continue it. I also can't wait to read your next one. I was wondering if you would please put on your list to get updates on your stories on your site? Thanks. Brandy |
| sarah chapter 1 . 4/26/2006 very sweet at the end |
| Joe's girl chapter 1 . 4/26/2006 Well done. I like the prose format so much better than your screenplay format. (Sorry, I get the sense that you prefer to write screenplays, but I simply cannot force myself to read them!) I think this chapter begs for a second. What happens after the day ends? Can Jack and Audrey make it together? I'd love to read more. |
| Breakwater chapter 1 . 4/25/2006 LOVE IT but you already know that! |
