John's awareness of Dean's emotional pain and his refusal to try to assuage that are painful to read.

This is not a good look on Dean. He's been captured by the Fae and they are not known as considerate lovers.

wonderful.

Awesome story! Finished it all in one sitting, I just couldn't stop reading! You have talent my friend. And goodness, the way you handled Dean was superb. Many thanks for sharing this with us!

Really, really enjoyed this story. You've got a gift. Also, fae in SPN fic are one of my favourite things. :)

I love this fic! Did you post the sequel on fanfiction? If so, what is it called? I really want to read it right now... I'm going to go try and find it. You are an amazing writer, the plot is so original! Unfortunately, Sam wasn't here, but if there's a sequel, then... :DD sorry, im not a very helpful reviewer -_-' But anyways, keep writing!
-1k

Wonderful story! Extremely well written and enjoyable to read. I am so glad I found it! I'll check out your other work now, because I definitely hope there is more!

I remember reading this back on LJ a few years ago, loved it, and promptly lost it due to link mix-up so I am so glad to see it again!

Sequel? :)

This fic is pretty old, but I just HAD to say how amazing it is. Your amazing writing style captured me within the first sentence, and 12 hours later, no breaks, eyes burning, and God it was so worth it. I'm quite speechless actually. Well..just...fantastic work on this! Easily one of the best fics I've ever laid eyes on!

Best thing about this story - that not only was it great, it was LONG! So many times, I start reading something and after a few chapters... But not here. You kept the tension singing all the way through, and explored some really interesting aspects to the Winchesters' relationship. Your take on John trying to cope with Dean coping with his blindness (I think that makes sense) was wonderfully bittersweet, and the realisation it finally leads him to is such a great way to set up for the show, even though it's AU.

And Dean, knowing something's going to happen... The images you painted of him, almost waiting for it, were beautiful.

Awesome read, and there's a sequel waiting for me to catch up with too!

Thanks!

Cal

Dang good story. I really liked how Dean and Johns relationship was detailed throughout the story.

Wow - I'm not sure where to start. I finally finished your story, I ended Chapter 1 confused and was equally confused by the very end.

The jumping back and forth gave me a headache and I do mean that literally. I almost didn't finish the story because I really hated reading it. I know that sounds harsh & I'm sorry about that.

I may check out your other stories when my headache goes away.

hi,

really great fic. thoroughly enjoyed it

xox

That was awesome. I really enjoyed it.

Awesome story! The characterization, plot, and everything was just really good. If you write a sequel (which I sincerely hope you do) I can't wait to read it!