I know that asking this is a bit late for the age of the story but I had to ask why has it taken so long for they are quantum signature to change? Think about it what do our bodies do with food and if they’re eating food with a quantum signature of the universe there in it would change their quantum signature. So therefore their quantum signature should have been changed a while back.

Which story is next?

What was the story from the "old Federation archive?"

Jeepers, this is a great storyline...

Great story, I am a big fan please check out my story United Conflict.

Just how many other EAS Ships, have names from the 'Chicago', IL. Area?

Does EARTH-ALLIANCE 'EVER' GROW THE FUCK UP, and stop their incessant whining!? I swear! They're even WORSE than the PAKLEDS in Picard's TNG universe! The WORST FUCKING THING TO HAPPEN TO 'EARTH', was for them to 'meet', THE CENTAURI

I realize that it's WAY TOO LATE, to matter, but General Denari's 'title', is spelled, 'R. E. G. E. N. T.' ! There's no 'a'. And when a military Force 'occupies', any 'civilian' area, they declare 'MARTIAL' LAW. Marshal Law gives the impression that someone like "Matt Dillon",
is going to be handling the problem!

Thank you for writing this story and series. It was very interesting and nicely plotted and put together. I am glad you made the earth's victory cost because it made it believable.

If you did continue this story could you somehow mention it in your next ATV update or if you edit this story?

I do have a request that you put a link or something in the story to Ren's version of the Sin attack. Its been so long since I logged into that I've lost my password and changed email addresses so I can't follow you.

Bummer.

I am on to check out Ruinations.

Thanks again for giving me MANY hours of enjoyment and interest.

Okay... This is the first time you have taken me out of the Suspension of Disbelief as a writer and you are making think about stopping this story. I feel like you have made the bad guys in this story too strong. There is no possible way earth could survive an attack, and while earth has its issues, its still home. Thus, either I continue to read about earth dying, or you pull some "magical" unsupported twist in the story.

Plus, this is beginning to mirror what is happening in America today, and its feeling me with a sense of dread for the first time...

Again, despite my issues with this chapter, I thank you for writing it!

I like this story, and when you had other characters making mistakes I was okay with it, until Delenn. Now I am not so sure.

Thank you for writing this story and I am truly enjoying it.

So Picard is willing to let Babylon 5 along with a half million people be destroyed because he is in a pissing contest with the EA? The EA that B5 is no longer a member of? That's beyond scummy. Garrets popping off with the "prime Directive" nonsense is also absolute Bullshit. Sheridan is right she uses it as a nexcuse. If it were being followed they shold have found an isolated place to stay and left everything else alone. Seems to me the real reason is the feds want to ensure that Sheridan has enough to keep him on the hook but not enough to even be even a remote threat to the Feds. Meanwhile the Klingons are laughing in Picards face as they upgrade the tech base of whomever they want to. The fact is Picards attitude is barely a step above Clark. Regardless of this Picard not being his original timeline counterpart, his life has magnified that Picards bad personality traits. He is arrogant, rigid, self-important, self-centered and closed minded. I find it beyond absurd that such a person was a successful or competent military commander

In general like the story,however on thing is teally starting to bug me to the point in rolling my eyes everytime it happens. The Sinhindrea are just too good. They are almost like Mary sue villians. They have every advantage. Their soldiers are better their ships are better even when you destroy their ships they kill you with radiation. Now in chapter 29 the suddenly pull this focused plasma beam thing out of their ass that fires almost 4 times faster than anyone thought. It just comes across as piling on. I'm starting to wonder how the Federation and its allies can even hope to win without pulling a giant magic rabbit out of their butts.

The irony about Aalaan fears about fighting the Federation is that was exactly what happened in A Thin Veneer. Excellent story.

BTW you should have known while you used "the prime directive" blather as a plot point that it only applied to societies that had not achieved space travel So whatpicard and garret have been spouting is nonsense. Also that they would even for 10 seconds use the prime directive as a means to leave earth completely denuded of defenses is the hiht of absurdity. and sticks out as a mammoth contrivance that makes both of the star fleet captains look like petty fools.