So, I finally took the time to read this story, including the TPM-exclusive chapters.

I can see where said this story lost its heart and soul, and I can see the problems in it (and not just the aesthetic ones).

I would provide my full opinion, but I don't want Brian to see it.

Excellently involving, please finish writing this.

Insane85

You know it was a good idea to have some of the major plot lines be illuminated this chapter I had almost lost track of what it was all about after such a long absence LOL But seriously a job well done your talent has obviously not dulled in the least. The backstory on both Gerald's family history and further insight into Degas and Alexander's scheme helped add a great deal of depth to the events that have already transpired and the ominous hints of things to come you added have easily reignited my fondness for this story. Here's hoping you update sooner this time around I'm quite eager to see what this 'second wave' is and what threat it poses to Gerald and the others, later!

Boy, I had a suspicion that was the relationship Gerald had with the mysterious Alexander but it didn't do much to lessen the emotional blow that came with it! Yet again poor Gerald winds up in a dire situation with no apparant way out. Alexander's true deck must be pretty nasty if he'd only use the Dark World cards as a part-time weapon of choice. Considering how much trouble merely surviving the onslaught of the Four Pillars its hard to imagine how you could top whats happened so far, but I'm pretty sure you'll find a way, in any case great work as always here's hoping you update soon, later pal!

wow, that was interesting, i wonder what's gonna happen next.

oh and i thought dark world lightning only worked on cards that were facedown.

-chaos from the knight of doom

Interesting chapter. Always enjoyed Dark World themes. Good work.

Ah, I was wondering when you would update! It was a very nice duel, with a good amount of Drama in to add to it all. A new being is released and right now misfortune will befall them all...this I gotta read. Update soon!

wow, he used slash draw, man that's so cool, great chapter, please do keep it coming

-chaos from the knight of doom.

man, i really don't like him. what he did to servant of catabolism was evil, i hope he gets taken down hard. otherwise an interesting duel and chapter.

-chaos from the knight of doom

that was an interesting duel i figured he had bad reaction, but sybol of heritage dosen't cost anything and crush card would have destroyed the tribute monster he drew with pot of greed, i should know i actualy played crush card before, but still pretty good.

-chaos from the knight of doom

it really was intresting, but torential tribute cannot be activated in chain to a set. also i've never really been found of mr. lark or his deck...no ofence.

-chaos from the knight of doom

interesting duel, and chaptter too,

-chaos from the knight of doom

that was a very interesting chapter i really liked it.

-chaos from the knight of doom

that was an interesting duel and a cool angel deck...

-chaos from the knight of doom

great chapter it was defidently unique.

chaos from the knight of doom.