It's been so long, and sadly, I very much doubt that this will be updated again, but nonetheless, I can still hope. I absolutely loved this story. The storyline and changes in the canon were masterfully created. Everything that happened was realistic enough that it could have been something that happened in the real book (except for the presence of the Elrics). I especially loved the whole Ravenclaw's scroll thing, that was genius. Excellent dialogue as well, expressing exactly the emotion that needed to be expressed in a situation. Really everything was absolutely amazing. I can only imagine the creativity and ingenuity needed to create such a masterpiece. I hope you (the author) have a wonderful day/week/year!

I can see where the Odyssey comes in, not just because of the sirens being there, but also how they look. They kind of sound like some interpretations of Scylla, from the same story.

This story was great I really liked it!
But are you ever going to finish it?
It says it hasn't been updated since april 2008,
is there another story that finishes it?
Or was it left unfinished?

good story

Great story. Lots of action and adventure. I would really like to see this story finished or a sequel.

I wonder if Harry actually has magic anymore, or if he was traded to Alchemy? Has Al lost his Alchemy?

Wouldn't the debt that Snape owes the Potters take a negative view of him killing a Potter directly? I hope Snape does not live long, or is always running and hiding.

I am so glad nobody has mentioned The Philosopher's Stone in Ed's hearing.

That Slytherin wants to mess with someone that single-handed killed Fenrir and used no magic to do it...that is Gryffindor foolishness.

Snape has fudged up because Al is going to release all kinds of Hades. Al never does much alchemy, but his is capable.

Nobody seems to be having a good time here, but another great chapter. I hope Fred gets free soon!

Nice job setting the scene! Poor Al.

Great start! I've read a couple stories where only Ed crosses over so it'll be interesting to see how this goes with both Ed and Al fighting for each other!

Oh man you've hooked me. This is so well written and so different from canon im loving it! (and oh man is Harry gonna meet Winry? Is she gonna go back with them to Harry's world? Are they gonna be able to get back to Amestris /again/ after all this? Are the worlds gonna collide and they'll all have to deal with homunculi? Please don't be rash, Al!)

This story is AMAZING! It isn't cliche, and you put your own twist into it. Plus you play the characters so well. Please Update!

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