I'm not a fan of EdXRoy, but I did like this, and I like your story so I liked it.

the only thing that i care for is the lack of royed lemony scene with ed as the uke (i dont like the seme is smaller than the uke).

Hahaha! Oh my gate this was hilarious! The ending was fantastic!

Armstrong was a stroke of genius. I laughed myself silly imagining their expressions!

I was waiting for this. You've kept them in character and still made it sweet. This is glorious.

Why were their pants wet? Were they walking through snow? Puddles? Rain?

Can not stop Laughing!

Oh, karma at its finest! Havoc/Armstrong was just hilarious!
But seriously, even though the ending seemed a bit too rushed, I loved the story as a whole! Great job, keep writing! :D

This story is so good! I feel so bad that I got to it late. It makes no sense to review every chapter now. *mope* But I'll read the whole thing. :D I happen to love Red a lot. (RoyEd)

It took all I had to not bust out laughing at certain parts. I didn't want to wake anyone up. This was great. lol...The last part where Roy and Ed got back at everyone was hilarious.

I actually like how teh real license was signed. Most would have done it in an unbeleivable, or stupid way. Pretending that they couldnt read or something. But this actually seemed beleiveable.

~Noah

Oh? Is that the end?

Kind of abrupt, I must say. Nevertheless, awesome story, keep writing! :)

NAwww i loove this story soo dam much!

you are an awesome fanfic writer. You know that right?

I wonder how old Ed is ?

haha

lol awesome chapter! poor breda and havoc...tho i think that havoc got the worser deal...