You seem to want to make it seem like naruto is smart and he’s hiding behind a mask but the way you wrote it makes naruto seem like an idiot the thinks he’s hiding behind a mask but he’s just an idiot

I don’t get this — Not quite what I expected…I guess I forgot to tell you but this bath water is seventy degrees. If you continue to fail, you'll become a boiled egg faster than a Hokage."
— is he saying hokages are boiled eggs?

Hbgg

Earth Curse seal in Japanese is Chi Juin Jutsu. Gaia is Greek for Earth.

You know, if you give the title of the next chapter at the end of this, and the title is "The Chase Begins", its kinda obvious, no?

Please read yajuu sannin. You may not have the time, but just read the fight scene with Kakashi.

I hate this it the same story and naruto is a annoying little bitch

Th for the chapter

If you’re going to copy the entire fucking thing as in the anime and just give your own title, I’d say that you’re better of not writing anymore

if things dont really change until Wave then either time skip or start there, don't waste our time with stuff we've seen hundreds of times before

Sasuke was fine. Awesome that Naruto is figuring out the rasengan. I'm kind of sad at the physical abuse that Naruto is experiencing from the villagers. Great to see how effective Narutos henge is.

What the hell Sakura. I hope Hinata grows more in confidence soon i really want her to be more assertive especially in defence of Naruto because that Sakura scene was sad.

A bummer that Naruto didn't hang out with Hinata but it's awesome that Naruto is a reason to actually study in order to make the rasengan. It's cool seeing the beginnings of the relationship between Naruto and Iruka begin at the ramen shop.

Love the pairing and way to go Kurenai.

ive read this story and unlike wat you said its not all that interesting, over 13 chapters in and its all canon. sure a few changes here and there but canon. plain old boring canon. nothing interesting has happened yet. i regret reading it, now i have to read the rest coz i dont like leaving stories half read.