| Reviews for Business as Usual |
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   Kurt Baros aka The Falcon chapter 12 . 3/30/2007 this was a very well thought out story i really enjoyed it...i printed out most of the story so i havent read that last two chapters but if its as good as what i have read so far then i will enjoy the reset...see you at work Amaya Embrill |
| blknblupanther1 chapter 12 . 2/25/2007 plz tell me there's another chapter coming up! i'll be watching 4 updates |
| MoogleX chapter 12 . 1/24/2007 It was a great story but the ending is confusing. Are Roy and Riza together now? You should definetly work on a sequel. It's one of the best FMA fanfics that I've read. |
| Becca chapter 12 . 1/18/2007 YAY! |
| anon chapter 11 . 1/18/2007 i did like, though it was a bit unlikely that they would do that right after she was raped. |
| klweiss92 chapter 12 . 1/18/2007 aww very cute |
| OTP chapter 12 . 1/17/2007 lol very well done loved it |
| fireworkmage chapter 12 . 1/17/2007 wow that was short...the image of roy bing handcuffed to a chair with his shirt halfe way down his body was interesting...lol anyway i hope the next chapter will be longer...until next time.. |
| jo chapter 12 . 1/17/2007 nice |
| Anicka chapter 12 . 1/16/2007 The balloon part at the end was kawaii. Nice story! |
| ann chapter 1 . 1/16/2007 is a very very nice story but i dont really like the part where Riza got rape, and specially not about Roy having sex with her right after what had happened. Maybe is just I prefer story with happier endings. Could u maybe write an alternative ending, with Roy got to the house right before the man tries to rape Riza and saved her. Riza will still endure through the emotional pain, and Roy could still help her heal.. that's my opinion. but nevertheless, i really like your story! |
| viper chapter 11 . 1/11/2007 oh...a happy ending... |
| MoogleX chapter 1 . 1/8/2007 I like this story so much! Roy is such a good guy and he really helped Riza. Can't wait to see what happened next! Update Soon! |
| fireworkmage chapter 11 . 1/3/2007 yeahness! another chapter..i juss started reading tosay so yeah...i hope u make another chapter soon.. |
| mylovemiroku chapter 11 . 12/24/2006 Well, I decided to read what there is of your story in one night, and I was linking it a lot until... she got kidnapped. Kind of boring in finding this guy Talsi, and then the details came to fast about the shed and this other guy. Then I liked it because it looked like someone had caused Riza some pain and that was true emotion, but the way Roy wanted to "heal" it, is not the way to go. Especially if this only happened earlier that day, or a few days ago. Lots of hugging close and then eventually him keeping her close as he held her next to him to sleep, but no sex. It crossed the line for me, but I'd still like to see how the story unfolds and if Ed and Havoc survived Talsi... |
