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Well I read it straight through, but might need to revisit the middle chapters where the time lines start to jumble. Helping a friend move for 6 1/2 hours and then taking pain medication tends to make time travel a tad bit confusing.

Great story. Loved the interactions between Rose and the Doctor.

OMG! I love it!

This is so tragically sad! *cries* She's dead! What is going to happen now?

It's awesome awesome awesome awesome! I wonder how this will all work out in the end! *squels*

Omg! This is BRILLIANT! Worthy of more than just favouriting, I think, but that's all I've got, soo...

That was fun. Great job, and thanks for the fun read.

*cries* She died of a broken heart! I loved this line: “Doctor, Rose is safe,” Avoria found herself saying. He paused and turned, his eyes very definite in his answer.

“But she isn’t with me.” (very romantic - or possessive - but I'll take romantic). This chapter was good (except for the whole Rose-dying-thing of course)- thumbs up!

Jerk! He wouldn't choose the TARDIS over Rose (I think). He'd be more like to fight for them both and end up losing everthing. So, who is Avoria? Is she just an OC or did really travel with the Doctor at some point?

Who is Lady Rosaline? I have to admit, I, like the Doctor, also thought of 'Romeo & Juliet when he mentioned Lady Rosaline.

Wha? No! Intriguing... Sad :-( Exciting! Heh - slain by the consequences of a sneeze. (now that's an interesting review if I've ever seen one. almost looks like a poem)

Yea - Pierre's going to be ok! I'm sorry you had to wait Rose but be glad it was two and a half hours instead of five and a half hours ;-) Oh, I hope the Doctor's ok - is Rose going to have to save him? Hm... I really need to stop reviewing every chapter (I just have so much to say!).

-horsefly-

Aw, Pierre thinks they're a couple! On that note, poor Piere - I wish his fate wasn't so sad! So, all this stuff about cats - is this mysterious stranger a cat-man (yeah, I know, it's a stretch). Argh! I'm still trying to remember if I've read this - I don't remember what happens but it seems a tad familer (maybe I read the first couple of chapters but not the rest?). Anway... interesting (and a little creepy!) so far!

Hmm...who could be writing the letters? Y'know, I don't think I've ever read this - what a shame! Well, I'm reading it now (and I don't have to wait for updates! mua-hua-hua!). I loved this line “And for another, since when do I call you ‘my dear’ or speak in that terribly corny way?” I was kind of thinking that when she found the letter. By the way, - update 'Partners in Time'! I'm off to see who this mysterious stranger is...

-horsefly-

Loved it! very enthralling and sweet and fun and exciting! I really enjoyed that story, and how you left it sort of.. hanging in the air.. is there a sequel? there were a few VERY minor spelling mistakes, nothing to worry about.. again, i really enjoyed this fic. Well done.