aw poor fai! :)

wow. I really loved this. It was a brilliant way of looking at things from Fai's perspective, and it was a really nice change of pace from the numerous KuroFai fic that are all romantic.

I think the best line was the one about having to banish himself. That one made me smile. so please, continue to write and produce wonderful stories.

Psychic_ramen

That was a really cool fic! Kurogane and Fai are such cool characters!

I feel really bad for Fai sometimes but it is brave of him to keep smiling all of the time.

Have a good day!

It's hard to tell if he's jealous of Kurogane, like he says, or if he's a bit jealous of Tomoyo...I like it.

Ooh, now I'm really impatient to get to Piffle country (that's the name, right?).

I can see why Fai is jealous. He has every right to be. Kurogane doesn't know...I'm sure he doesn't. The blessed don't understand what they have, they never do. Especially the kind who get banished from what they have.

Your stories are telling me much about Tsubasa, and don't worry, I'm not angry. It makes me wonder, and makes me curious. I can see why you would want to write about them.

Anyway...Good job.

Ah, I loved it! It's one of those ideas that doesn't cross most people's mind, and it certainly hadn't even occurred to me. I loved it, great job and you get a lot of originality points!

Fai and jealousy works so good, it's not funny! I love this!

Fai being jealous of Kurogane... I had suspicions about something like that, but never actually thought about it any further. You seamed it all up quite nicely, I'm glad I read it.

(big grin)

Keep it up, honey!

~B.T.A. Ria-Chan is happy!

That was greatness...Please write more of these!

Interesting. I don't think Fai's the jealous type but who knows, when it comes to him...anything's possible.

You made a good point about Kurogane's and Fai's relationships with their sovereigns. I think it's possible, though, that they would have each turned out differently if they'd met the other's princess/king at an early age, so Fai might have no reason to be jealous (he'd turn out like Kurogane, Kurogane would turn out like him) though not necessarily; it's hard to guess.

hi! poor Fye-chan! xD jealous... but i couldnt understand if he was jealous of Kuro-sama 4 having Tomoyo, or jealous cuz he luvs Kuro xD (but maybe it was cuz cannot understand english very well U such a baka )~ but, nyways liked ur fic... its written so perfect! x3 congrats, n hope u have lots of rvws! i would ask u to read my fic xD but its in spanish -_-U (if u speak it maybe u could U) n, oh yeah xD KuroFye rulz xDD duncha luv em? *-* thanks 4 writte, read ya!

HxR4evr!

.::Maki Tasui::.

Nice and unique idea :)