Reviews for Unknown Relations: The Philosopher's Stone
TheGreywaren26 chapter 3 . 7/18
I'm gonna be honest, I expected him to be sorted into Slytherin but I suppose you're right, it will force some sort of interaction between the two. And I'm going to miss Ron too since he's off with the alleged 'boy-who-lived'. Also, Orian won't have the invisibility cloak since James probably gave it to Hayden -or kept it to himself?- so this is going to make sneaking around a LOAD harder. Really interesting story so far, can't wait to finish it!
Guest chapter 4 . 5/2
Eh, I'm not very impressed with lazy writers who follow canon. If I wanted to read canon, I'd just reread the series because CANON HAS ALREADY BEEN WRITTEN. Bah.
Midnite Girl chapter 10 . 3/23
Question that's always been bothering me, the scene where Ron gets struck upside or across the head with the stone arm of the chess piece. How in the world wasn't he seriously concussed, stubbing my unprotected toe against a concrete curb hurt ?
Star1X chapter 1 . 3/7
I love this whole series! Have you thought about coming back to it?
Vampireking40 chapter 3 . 10/18/2019
So I take it Orion is actually Harry who survived the attack that his brother was held a hero for.
D.J. Scales chapter 8 . 8/20/2019
Well one. That right there was interesting.
Vampireking40 chapter 1 . 10/2/2018
From what I read in this first chapter. I would have to assume Orion is actually Harry Potter the forgotten son of the Potter family.
Calmzone1 chapter 12 . 9/26/2018
Well done! Great story.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/10/2018
Chapters 1 & 2 were great, but this chapter is mostly word-for-word straight from JKR's book. I've already read that. I don't think I can wade through acres of canon to find out about Orion's intriguing past.
JohnpokiSnar chapter 12 . 5/15/2018
I would also like to say that the people flaming have no idea what they’re talking about.
JohnpokiSnar chapter 12 . 5/15/2018
I love this so much. I usually don’t like twin fics that much, but I really like this one. Keep writing
Anon chapter 5 . 1/18/2018
Instead of doing something more, you just took an idea and bypassed through all the events in an totally underwhelming manner.
Noradin chapter 4 . 11/17/2017
I'm not quite sure how Neville would turn out as timid as in canon when his parents are alive, nor how the same excuse as in canon would still apply.
Noradin chapter 3 . 11/17/2017
The Gryffindor choice seems ok, but meeting Hermione on the train this way feels contrived and picking Hedwig is just unnecessary and unlikely unless you want to introduce totem animals next.
Noradin chapter 1 . 11/16/2017
This is a bit of a summary at the beginning and thus a bit short on details.
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