This was... interesting. Definitely one of the best stories with a dark Harry I've read. Very twisted, brutal, sad, and strangely real.

Those fights against the bead guy and the man with the sword and book were pretty awesome by the way. Very unique and among my favourite fight scenes I've read.

What a cringe worthy rapey story!
Wasted an hour to read this shit!
I don't understand what was the plot of the story. This story doesn't make any sense.
Even with the dark arts, Harry wouldn't go so low to rape someone. Dark arts doesn't affect that much this early.

This one was so dark I feel tainted by reading it. It was gritty and frustrating and the way they both behaved and refused to reconsider was maddening.
At first I thought Jamie was a creation of the mirror, the artifact trying to suck Harry in. Maybe it was true, but the story frames it another way.
At the end ! Spoilers I was strangely relieved at how she was broken, stripped of her power. It is also slightly off for me, how Harry did almost nothing to beat her, only gaining power through one trade. Not your typical storytelling.
After all, it was not an issue. The real issue is that I feel like the last chapter begins a new story I don't get to read :(

Nice dark Harry, it is refreshing to see a story where Harry goes dark and does not have any qualms about it. Your story also did a good job showing how the Dark Arts are considered evil even as the main character embraced them. Thanks for the good story

This is one of my favorite fanfictions.

Does anyone know of any fictional novels similar in premise? i.e the protagonist has a "utility function" of sorts and overcomes complex and difficult obstacles and learns the secrets of the universe on his path to achieving it. The only other fanfictions that come to mind are "Too Young To Die" and "The Last Enemy"

A fun read indeed.

Damn. I've never read a fanfic with a plot like this... Simply amazing and a great "quick" read. Well done sir!

This is a pretty hot chapter. Still, Harry is shaping up to be an incel's wet dream, so depending on how much more pathetic Harry becomes, I may stop reading this story all together.

I did not expect something like this at 4 am
Dark but not edgy Harry is hard to find.

Very nice! Although I would dearly wish to know of what happens next and of how the other universe fare with their saviour

Really good fic, not normally one to enjoy sub/dom and noncon you managed to really draw me in.

Edgy rapefic trash.

"Hissss."

Fucking seriously? Didn't know whether to laugh or cringe at that. Awful, just awful.

This was good. Really, really good.

Legendary. This fic is legendary. This is the best fanfic I have ever read. Thank you so much for sharing this.

excellent work, was a unique dark Harry which is hard to find nowadays