Why is everything in bold?

ugh, is it so difficult for authors to put up a warning about torture-porn? It's 11 letters, it's not that hard. I don't need to get tricked into knowing this much about the disturbing stuff that gets the author off.

Another amazingly written story, I really can't put into words how I feel about your writing and the graceful way it just seems to flow with such meaning and truth, kudos to you and your friends that supported you through this for a beautiful fanfiction

I loved this dark story...I couldn't put it down the last week. Thanks for sharing your talent!

Great story!

Awesome and worth the time to read

Achika had it darn well right!

Congrats on a successful story!

Finally, someone who has given Sidious a good, dramatic death. You don't know how many poorly-written fight scenes I've face-palmed my way through...!
I don't see what's so hard! Just describe people attacking an older, viscous a-hole! Simples!
Anyway; most of the Sidious death scenes (except Purgatory. That is the best fic I've ever read) are absolute crap and don't stir a single emotion. This did quite a bit better, but not as well as it could have. Just a tip - actually have fighting, next time? And don't underestimate the old bastard. He can fight.

It took 14 years of careful manipulation to turn Anakin. Die it really take longer for Luke? Really?

Also, of the two of them, Vader can easily overpower Luke and Leia, even if they fought together. I'm just worried about Vader Vs Sidious. Sidious would win that one, I think.

Cold because Vader was listening in.

Bitches gonna DIEEEE

That, Vader, is your current.

Me upon reading the words 'Darth Vader': PEOPLE ARE GONNA DIIIIIIIIIE, BITCHES! WOOOOOOOOOOO! ALL ABOARD THE KICK-ASS BAMF-NESS TRAIN!

As I have probably mentioned before; I am a complete psycho. Sorry.

Just saying, but the only real reason for the Rebels to not get crushed by Vader was Luke. If Luke hadn't been there after the first movie, then the Rebels would have been killed almost immediately. Not immediately simply because Vader wouldn't have even been that bothered; just ordered to do it. However, if he was truly furious at them, they would have been destroyed immediately. Luke acted like a shield against Vader: he didn't want to hurt his son in any way.
So, what's going to happen here is that the Rebellion will be utterly decimated, then he will find out that old Sheev that bastard is raping his son, and then he will rip the fucking universe apart to get to that old, ugly fucker.

Sorry.

I don't take sexual assaults well on any level.

And protective Vader is cute af.

Sheev.

I give you the #1 deadest person ever!

Seriously though he shall DIE YOU SICK ARRAGONT FUCK. DIEDIEDIE.

Sorry. Just... Take it as a compliment, since your writing is good enough to provoke an emotional response.

I'm going to really REALLY enjoy it when he gets what's coming to him. Preferably with a long, epically written fight scene with not too much witty banter, and an overabundance of emotional Vader and drama.

Oo, fandom turns us all into psychopathic maniacs!