Reviews for The Power to Heal and Destroy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey this one was pretty good! Here's hoping for a sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Já te falei que adoro o título da sua fanfic? Ela é perfeita! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The POV shifts from sentence to sentence are really jarring. Lots of misused/misspelled words. This feels very unpolished, and the main premise seems forced and somewhat unrealistic. Sometimes first chapters can be really clunky and then the story smooths out after that, so I'll try another chapter or two to see if it gets better... |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Wow, so Naruto is meant to be smart, tactical and whatever, but he didn't bother to use the Tsukuyomi on Orochimaru? Okay then. |
![]() ![]() OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! KISAME JUST GOT BEAT LIKE HIS MUM BEATS HIM GG NO RE |
![]() ![]() ![]() This could’ve been a good story if you allowed naruto to do what he said he was gonna do. “Oh you hurt my friends, now I’m gonna kill you” then he lets them walk away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So did you actually rewrite this, or are you just blatantly lying? I really hope it's the second option, because if you DID rewrite this, you've got some sort of brain problems. These "rewritten" chapters are still full of spelling mistakes, grammar mistakes, etc. This is a joke. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really great story. I thought you nailed the characters and I loved Naruto’s new gritty personality. I wished you could’ve made a sequel also specify which girl would’ve end up with Naruto. My money and hope was on Sakura but oh well the story was still good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the amazing read. It would be awesome if you made a sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This really was a good fanfic! I do wish that you had made a sequel, but I understand why you wanted to end it. I enjoyed reading your work very much! Keep up the good work on your future stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you know that it keeps burning until naruto deactivates it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol... Bruh Naruto can nerf Gaara rn. Spam Amatretsu |
![]() ![]() I just finished reading your story and I had to say a few things. Thank you for the great read. I was captured by this story pretty much throughout. I have enjoyed it. Your a fantastic writer and if you ever make another straight Naruto story I'd love to read it. That also goes for the sequel. I know this was hard for you to do and all but you did wonderfully. Thank you for all the moments where I felt down but I was able to read this. Again you did wonderfully. I cant thank you enough. |