Thank you for bringing this fanfic to life. It was beautifully written and love all the funny moments. XD I know you said Su was not supposed to end with anyone in the fellowship but I love that hint you did between her and Haldir. Thank you for doing that! I was grinning like hell while reading their scene together.

That. Was. Freaking. Epic.
That's all I have to say.
Absolutely epic.

Very amazing story. I loved every bit of it.

The Pevensies in Middle-Earth is a concept I have always found interesting. But I have never read a fic in which the Wardrobe directly led them to Middle-Earth. That was new for me.

The character interaction and development was very well done and the fight scenes were great too.

The best bits were definitely Lucy bonding with Frodo and Sam.

The reunion in the end hit me in the feels (in a good way of course).

The Pevensies getting their titles was a nice touch too.

Also, great job saving all the characters. I have seen Boromir and Haldir survive in some LOTR/any other fandom crossover fics but Theoden and Denethor surviving was new.

Loved this. Amazing story.

A very impressive piece of work. Well written, true to self characters, and enough change from the books that it is worth reading. Thank you for writing it.

One thing needs to be done. The story needs to be marked as complete. I almost skipped this because I thought it was incomplete

I really wish you wouldn’t make Susan do everything Legolas does it’s very annoying

I stand corrected! This IS complete! Once I read the lines where the Pevensies were going to go on a horse ride, I was dreading the end! Now I'm back to feeling all sorts of distress asdjfk;aweofaskd;fja;seoi

This has been by far one of the most well written story I have ever read! Hats off to you for all of those hours going through the books and movies and typing everything down to perfection! This is one I will most definitely be coming back to to reread!

So it is with great distress that I have just NOW realized that I am reading an incomplete fic due to the lack of a "Complete" indicator - heart crying! But I am going to power through the heartache and read the rest of your splendid work!

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I was wondering when and how you were going to incorporate the Pevensies gaining the titles! You are brilliant!

I have really enjoyed "The Hobbit, the Ring, and the Fellowship" thus far! I am so glad that I had stumbled upon the title from an author's note from another fanfic. The character development in the Pevensies is spot on. I definitely see the growing traits of the magnificent, the gentle, the just, and the valiant.

Great job with incorporating Boromir so far (from what I've read at this point). I understand that it is difficult placing what was supposed to be a dead character in further chapters. However, it has been a splendid job so far!

Haven't watched the movie, read the book soo I'm gonna guess that this is following the film...

Edmund is priceless! I love his attitude so much! And I would never leave anything private/embarrassing within his reach.

I hope you make a sequel soon. There's so much left unanswered! Who was Professor Kirke speaking with in the flashback whose name started with an "I"? Why did Saruman seem familiar to Peter? Did Professor Kirke and his friend Polly go to Middle-Earth instead of Narnia like the Pevensies did here? So many questions! And most of all: will the Pevensies ever go back to Middle-Earth?

I hope so!

Now that I think about it, Frodo and Mr. Tumnus actually do look rather alike.

Really, Edmund?

I adore this story. It is really well written and the plot is very enticing. I especially loved how you refrained from adding in the Narnia plot line but kept their characters the same. This chapter especially was nice.
Sincerely,
Bunniesonrainbows