Cute XD

Hey its really nice for a first timer. Although I don’t really see a reason why Tyson would fall for Kai on the first day they met, but anyways the later part is nicer .I liked the term”sensual dance” used for a kiss there.

hey, TyKa rules.

Keep writing.

I like this story. But if i may, i'd like to point out that "Right" was spelt wrong. (whoa, that sounded strange! .) it's some ways down, and it's when Kai's talking.

I thought this was nicely written and sweet. D

That was SO cute! Loved it!

“Agh” Yelled Tyson as he held his chest “Are you trying to kill me? Approach like a normal person will you.”

LOL, poor Tyson, great story! I really need to read more TyKa/KaTy stories... that was so random. -.-'

_bluerosety_

This fic is so sweet... I almost cried!

Good fic ! Fluff, I love fluff ! _~ But seriously, it was very good for a first time ! I'm impressed ! -

Keep it up ! .

This was pretty good for a first time fic, I liek it Nice job!

for a first fic it was really good :D

aww fluffy goodnes

aw that was so cute chapter

ow...it was so cute...