I think Hermione has been too conditioned by Dumbles to always be making demands of Harry like this. She is NO friend of Harrys that's for sure.

Thank you for being one of the very few fics I have read that has someone trying to teach Hermione to not be so rude and to learn to keep her nose out of other peoples business.

Your lack of proper punctuation and flighty thoughts made these last 2 chapters very hard to read and follow. You should maybe read each line before entering it. Read your chapters thoroughly before uploading to the site.

Did you notice that Harry has to apologize to Ron, yet he really deserves to have apologies from Ron and both Mr. and Mrs. Weasley? I have read a lot of stories about how Ron has mistreated Harry and that Mr. Weasley would never side with his wife regarding Harry. I was appalled at the chapter where Mr. Weasley chastised Harry about not apologizing to both Ron and Mrs. Weasley. In this case, they ALL should apologize to Harry. I am glad that Hermione is getting it through her head that she does NOT have to know everything that Harry is doing, and that Harry is learning something she really has no right to know.

Glad to see you back at it! Sorry things have been so terrible for you in real life.

I'm so happy that you try to finish this story...Because it's perfect. This story has everything I was looking for...I ea so so so sad that you stop writing it. So when I woke up this morning and I saw the e mail, I was surprised but very very happy! So thanks! And I am very sorry for your loss...

Severus Snape

Wow! Hermione is seriously ungrateful. Guess she's going to learn the hard way. Ouch!

What is wrong with the words in this chapter it's very distracting and makes it hard to follow

Wait whos Harry pairing with?

This chapter ties many loose ends up, and sets the stage for the smooth continuation of the story.
While it could have been part of the previous chapter, it does serve a definite purpose and therefore is not garbage.
When I am writing, I sometimes forget that my readers are not in my head with me so they actually need this kind of information to help them enjoy the storyline the way I want them to.

I mostly write for children and fantasy readers, and while my imagination is a sometimes wonderful place, even I get lost in it from time to time. This kind of chapter guides readers to the next scene in a gentle flowing manner.

TeaGranniemcmlxiii

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I thought Rowena Ravenclaws descendent had control over the dementors not sal slytherin

But anyway I absolutely love this story and the plot

Hi! Just a note for the wonderful author: I'm not a native English speaker. Any skills in English I have are from reading too much... fanfiction included. I would like to congratulate you for your work which I like very much. To have writing with a disability is very very difficult and your writing is clearly understandable even un-betaed. Thank you for being there and good luck with your life!

it is good

This chapter has a bunch of weird symbols in the middle of words making it really difficult to read.