Reviews for Kiss |
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![]() ![]() very well done |
![]() ![]() aw why would we sue you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was great! You did an excellent job of getting into Renton's head. That, and I'm a fluff addict. I've got to say that your fluff is some of the best I've ever had. Even being as short as it is, your little story pulled me right into it and really made an impact. Great Writing! :) |
![]() ![]() Oh my goodness! That was completly adorable! You got Renton's thoughts exact! It sounds so much like him. It's hard making a character sound believable. Making them sound like how they should, but, wow! It sounds exactly like Renton. I love it. Make more, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I saw that one, sad... well update soon!:p |
![]() ![]() That was too cute! At first I thought they did really kiss, but I remeber watching the episode. You ahd me going silly! Anywho, keep up the great writing. I'd love to read more of your stories! Love Kagome 32 Shrine |
![]() ![]() ![]() well,i dont really think that would have happened but who am i to judge? whatever good fic i think,but I dont know that much so,farethy well |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! Very cute drabble, and it fits perfectly with the show too. Renton's thoughts were dead on too, as far as I'm concered (sp?). I also like the RentonxEureka pairing too. n-n Great job, kid! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha poor Renton. sometimes you just wanna hug him cause he's so naive and cute ;) haha. then other times you wanna be like Talho and hit him up side the head or something cause of his idiocy but that's ok. great job on entailing his feelings. some author's don't do that very well. keep writing! |
![]() ![]() Very good. Not a lot of Eureka 7 fanfics as of now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good, and the perfect length. I just have trouble imagining Maurice laughing...I still see him with a shotgun (wups, spoiler! ~_~) But good portrayal of how Renton would think. Drabbles rule. Without wax, Steven |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so cute! Your view of Renton is very accurate. What happened in his imagination really seemed like something he would think XD Renton is so positively cute and funny at the same time~ I wish to see more RentonxEureka fanfics by you in the future |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very sweet, Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously Short but I like the way you portrayed Renton's inner thoughts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a cute story. Please make some more. Renton and Eureka forever. |