Reviews for Trapped
Bob chapter 26 . 7/22/2012
Why on earth would she consider inviting christopher? Stupid stupid story.
Bob chapter 18 . 7/22/2012
Why ON EARTH would she wear the ring around Emily before she told her? How idiotic are you making these people! Or maybe you are this idiotic and you think this is normal?
Bob chapter 12 . 7/21/2012
Cheesy or predictable? No chance.
Bob chapter 8 . 7/20/2012
The way things are worded in this chapter have Lorelai basically say she'd still be with Max if he'd came after post non-wedding. How does that make Java shippers feel about the story? I'll tell you - shit. Get a grip.
Bob chapter 7 . 7/20/2012
Earlier she told Luke that she did not love Max but here she just told max "it's not that I didn't love you". I HATE inconsistencies like this. I also HATE her declaring that she has loved someone other than Luke. What she said towards the end of season 6 is true. She never loved anyone until Luke.
Jeremy Shane chapter 10 . 8/24/2008
good chapter
Jeremy Shane chapter 8 . 8/24/2008
good chapter
Jeremy Shane chapter 6 . 8/24/2008
good chapter
Jeremy Shane chapter 4 . 8/24/2008
good chapter
Jeremy Shane chapter 2 . 8/24/2008
good chapter
piggyoinks247 chapter 28 . 7/17/2007
Good job on this story! I loved it from the very beginning. K now I'm off to read the sequel. Keep on writing!
gilmorefanforever chapter 30 . 7/14/2007
That was so cute! Good job!
gilmorefanforever chapter 12 . 7/13/2007
So, this is a really good story and I'm going to finish reading it, but where in the world is Jess? You said it was set after Lorelai and Max ended their engagement, and Jess comes in like an episode after that!
widgetgirl chapter 19 . 7/2/2007
Wow! great story! I'm hooked. a newcomer but hooked!
cywen69 chapter 30 . 6/2/2007
I totally loved this story. I loved the wedding and the foreplay in the foyer. Hey that would be a great title don't ya think. LOL Dirty. They are so loving in this it's really wonderful.

Wendy
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