Reviews for Accidental Trip |
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Santoramon chapter 18 . 3/21/2015 good story awesome plot. like the way emotion talk to one another, and was good build up |
Moderately Mad Moxxi chapter 18 . 3/11/2012 i liked the story. really funny with just enough romance. and by the way. the epilogue was just hilarious. Whacking all the villains with it ;P |
Eragon chapter 10 . 9/11/2011 Even though I've read this story a lot, I still laught at their reaction. I realized that in this chapter, Knowledge stutters and she never, and I mean never, stutters. |
willotaku9000 chapter 3 . 7/20/2011 It's "Booyah" but aside from that, Awesome! |
Eragon chapter 18 . 1/28/2011 I think that Happy made Raven think that they'll need a whale to fit it. |
Eragon chapter 13 . 1/28/2011 I kinda wish that Wisdom and Beast Boy kissed. By the way, why did Timid had to chicken out of kissing him. I bet so far Raven kinda of denies that she loves Beast Boy. |
Denalien chapter 10 . 1/23/2009 MAAN NOW I COULDN'T WATCH THE TEEN TITANS FOR A MONTH! GÁH (that part:Yeah, but I’m not sure she can fit that elephant trunk up in her grill.) I CAN'T EVEN LOOK AT BB OR RAVEN FOR THAT MATTER! GÁH |
Ccero chapter 18 . 1/20/2008 SEQUEL!SEQUEL! SEQUEL! |
titanfan45 chapter 5 . 1/4/2008 Boing. Silence. Ah! In my mind I can picture it and I hear Tom of Tom and Jerry fame, screaming. A very funny mental image. I'm reading this story for the second time and just wanted to comment on this scene. |
titanfan45 chapter 18 . 12/1/2007 A very funny and entertaining story. My only big criticism is that that story was so well written, that you could have easily omitted the foul language and the abuse of God's name. I really enjoyed the humor and the mental image of BB in pain, waving a white flag was hilarious. The emotions gathered around the green book admiring BB's "Trunk" was a hoot. Raven's final comment in the final chapter was priceless. I'm adding this to my favorites and I'll be reading your other stories as well. |
spam29rice chapter 18 . 6/18/2007 um... ahem... A lot of that was... amuzing, yet... really, REALLY embarassing to me, I liked it though. |
spam29rice chapter 12 . 6/18/2007 Hey! What's up? I'm back, just gone because of school, I'll be here all summer. Anyways, I like your story, I won't review again until the end though, since it's finished. |
LOGEN chapter 18 . 6/3/2007 I LOVE UR STORIES! please write more |
ken chapter 18 . 5/30/2007 "evil laugh" So... Raven found out about the shower room picture... yeah... |
reader chapter 18 . 5/29/2007 is that really the end of this story? the last chapter seem fine enough to be the ending but this you need to add on. good story none the less. |