It was a great idea for you to put the master chief with the red's. And I am a big fan of this story

Was thus your own idea? ...or did you get it from YouTube?

Best story ever of all time but no sequel
it's 2014 but it's such a shame

Listen don't go and say you'll wright something wen u don't cause dats just a dick move man sorry but it really is

Sequel pleaseeee!

This is a really awesome story and i loved it! but when are you writing a squeal? its already 2013, 6 years late :p

One of the most amazing stories I've ever read.

Hey are you gonna continue this story. Its now 2011 and you havent done anything with it. I just recently re read it because of how much i liked it the first time and as hoping for something new.

I like it so far, but a major problem is that it stopped being funny. Even the red zealots weren't all that funny, and Caboose all but disappeared

I like it so far, but a major problem is that it stopped being funny. Even the red zealots weren't all that funny, and Caboose all but disappeared

Well. I was wondering about your story at first, but this plan to shanghai Caboose and the flag is brilliantly amusing. I'm looking forward to seeing where you took the plot from here.

I totally love this story! It's great how you kept everyone in character through the funny moments and the serious ones too. Hope you're able to write the sequel, really wanna know what happens next! Great stuff.

screw EST, PST kicks ass

random question is the area they found the waterworks halo 2 multiplayer map?

rvb is so funny. good idea to include the chief in this. when does this take place, before or after halo 3?