Quite extraordinary writing. You are very talented! :D

o too deep for my small brain to understand. leme try and read it again. *reads over* oh, i get it now. your right htat is strange. but it makes sense. oddly enough. i

One particular run on sentance, and some lovely describing in this fic overall. Wonderful job - the poem matches Zuko and Katara perfectly.

I like your choice of poem. I have a special affinity for Robert Frost's poems. I think that you did a good job of correlating it with the poem, using just the right breaks in the poem.

This isn't how I would do it, though. I would have set the poem amongst a scene of fighting between Zuko and Katara, which would more go with the theme of destruction in the poem. Maybe even have more of a theme of destruction and pain.

I like your use of the present tense instead of the normal past tense. A nice touch

Rating: * out of five. Would have been better if it had more theme of destruction, but it was good to define the destroying characteristics of each of them and their elements.

Yay Zu/Kat! . I liked this... I'd read the poem a while ago, when discussing the Big Bang theory(and, conversely, The End)in science class. I liked it then, too. Nice fic, I appreciate it.