And I forgot to mention that your characterization of them both is magnificently awesome. Love Molly & Arthur!

This is amazing! I LOVED IT. And, since I'm doing a challenge on these two, I searched for fluffy fics about them, and I think this is the best one I've read so far. It helps me since I've never written Molly/Arthur before. -favs-

OMIGOD i couldn't even finish it. everything was so over-explained. you completely ruined the pace of it. like with the kiss.. she was describing her feelings and then you wrote 'and her lips instinctively softened against his' and i'd already forgotten that they'd been kissing before all that.

and what's with molly and the whole 'omg arthur you've got to tell me the whole effing truth right this minute regardless of whether it may be best for me not to know so you can spare my feelings' thing. just .. GAH!

that was SOSOSOSOSOSO GOOD! can you make this a three parter? PLEASE!

i love the pairing! good story!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story! I liked how you were able to write the Fat Lady so well, it was wonderful! I also enjoyed the interaction between Molly and Arthur. Excellent!

I love Nearly Headless Nick... he sounds precisely as he should.

Cute story, very good writing :) Keep it up!

Sque! Molly/Arthur fluff! _

This was such a cute story! The exchange between the two out on the lake was so sweet! _ And that kiss was really romantic.

aw I love it. I really hope there's more, darlin!

Love

Cody*

Well, well, this is the LJ/this site story that seemed to be never ending. Heh, heh.

At any rate, nice job extrapolating on a brief mention in Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire. I had an inkling halfway through that this was the incident referred to, but I couldn't quantify that until toward the end.

While it's been a while since I've read the books and I can't clarify whether they're in character or not, I have to admire you for writing a whole revolving around them. I like how you've worked his Muggle obsession into something that's lasted the test of time, like their relationship. I also like how you've worked later faucets of their personality into them as teenagers. I'd forgotten there were other caretakers other than Filch (once again, shows you how long it's been since I've read the books).

(smirks) Uncle Patrick. Lol.

At any rate, I never considered the idea that their families might have disagreed with their choices in lovers, but then again, I obviously haven't been reading it as closely as you. I can see Molly's brothers as akin to Fred and George and being rather overprotective over her because she's their only sister (like Ginny is the twin's). Hence, if they see someone they disapprove of (like Arthur obviously is), they step up.

You, as usual, dish out the fluff. I guess I can't do it as well as you because I've never been kissed by my true love or indeed, been in passionate love. Nonetheless, you do it justice as usual.

Nice job. :)