Ohhh this is so cute and sweet and wonderful. Loved it!

aw really nice and romantic!

Thanks! That was cute. I don't usually read Mal/Inara but you made it worth it.

that was REALLY good!

Loved it.

Had this bookmarked. Forgot why till now...sight wouldn't let me review when I'd first read it. So a little late, sorry!

Love this add/AU on.

MORE Malnara I say!

Colly E. of twin*muse

Very sweet! )

Aww. Mal is such a woobie. Major points for character faithfulness; great banter, great interaction. My only nitpick is that halfway through the fic, you switch POV—which if fine, of course, but since it’s sort of a ways down, the reader is already under the impression that the story is supposed to be from Mal’s perspective. Anyway, awesome fic, I love it. )

This is my first time reading a Firefly fic. I've been watching a marathon all day.

This was very well done. And it was very much in character, which is always a plus. _

RedGem270 a.k.a. Jess

Wow...now this is definitely a missing moment that should have been shown during the series, even if the idea had gotten reused for something else down the road between these two:D

You write Mal and Inara's slowly weakening barriers and slowly increasing dance so well, smokydays...the right mix of humour and pathos and the unique qualities that allow us to like Mal's rather troubling devil-may-care attitude and Inara's emotional restraint:)

BlueEyedBrigadier

Now there's all kinds of pretty and characters were all true to themselves. Love the line: "And here I thought scars made you all manly," *Grin* thankyou for writing.

this was so sweet! and in character, not an easy achievement! very well done! :)

Aw... That was all sorts of shiny!

"'Cause I'm sayin' you're beautiful? C'mon," he smiles. He's feeling lighter and lighter now, and even pain's going away. "You've always known I thought so..." - Perfectness! I love your Mal and Inara!

-SerenityMeiMei