Wow. I know it's been 14 years since this was updated. But I wish I could read more, it's magnificant.

It's almost been 10 years since this was updated and Evelyn is such an amazing and realistic character! Please update soon, I really want to continue reading! :D

I really really love this. I saw it on a Norribeth fan fiction Rec but now I'm completely astounded by how you've managed to make me yearn for Evelyn and James. Frankly, considering she is your OC only and will only ever appear in your fanfic, knowing that I won't be able to read more of the two is awful especially since you haven't uodated in years. Please update, I truly wish I had your ability to make people so intrigued and upset because of your story ending so abruptly. And I really need to see some sort of resolution between the characters. It's practically inhuman for you to stop there;) I mean your fanfic hasn't been updated for years and people still rave about it. Update soon? Please? It would be amazing if I was the one who got you to do it, and to simply read more of the story!

Man, what a note to leave off on! Even though you haven't updated this story in seven years, I still say it's one of the best PotC fics I've read. Norrington's a broken man, Evelyn is a stoic and poised...something. It's all so well done.

Omg this story is way too good to have been on hold for over six years! You've managed to write an original character that fits flawlessly into the story that's relatable and someone that you want to root for. Please consider writing more!

this story is well thought out. this is well written. it's such a shame you never finished. I admire the stoicism and reservation of evelyn. I very much like how this story continues off from DMC and that you've kept james in character. perhaps someday you'll finish. that would be lovely, til then cheers!

This is a very well written story and I hope you'll continue it.

~NINJAkookie~

I really like where this story seems to be heading and really wish that you will be able to continue with this story and update soon. I'm dying to find out what actually happened to Evelyn in the past!

I also like the complexity that you've given the characters, especially Evelyn. She's not predictable, which is wonderful and gives a lot of potential and life to the story.

Keep up the great work and I hope you find inspiration to continue with this story soon!

I.

Love.

This.

Story.

I love it.

And I am thoroughly upset that there is no chapter after 10!

:(

I don't think you're going to continue this, but I will you to. . .

It is lovely. I kept reading from chapter to chapter. It kept me interested in its entirety. Good writing!

I read this fic for the second time and let me tell you i felt in love of it once again...You're story is great...i see you've resume your writting work so let me ask you...would you be so kind and write more about this? Thanxs

Very interesting. I like Evelyn a lot more than I thought I would. I think James is of the same mind.;)

I look forward to seeing what will come when all the secrets are revealed and the players have acted their parts. I'm most curious to see how this marriage progresses and where Evelyn's loyalties will eventually settle themselves.

Thanks for posting. More soon?

-Ellie

oh no!

no no no!

you just have to finish it! oh please... this is absolutley amazing... usually i get bored with alot of descirption and not enough dialogue- but this is brilliance!

i really hope you get back to finishing this one...

it really is never too late...

i understand that it's been quite some time since this has been updated, but i do hope that you will take up this story again, it's quite good. so, please update soon!

Oh, this is quite good! I very much look forward to reading the rest of it! :D

Just so you know, you really must update this story. I still remember the first time I saw it in my email inbox: NEW STORY: "Beneath Your Eyes" Wandering Child.

Ah how long it's been!

I just reread it and am (still) dying to know what happens, so give a girl a break, eh?