Reviews for Obsession
Andrithir chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Pretty kewl about the allegory, but some of the dialouge started to lead me away from the "idea".

The ending has ruined Chip packets for me now well.

Great Work.
Caramel Cheescake chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
Aww, darn. I was kinda hoping for something..
Inflated chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Ok.. i really didn't expect it to be a chip bag opening... and omg you are SUCH a twisted person
Demi Brackensick chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
how come you made it sound so... you know. lol
Nessie's bff chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
hehe you crazy person...
Filipina-baller09 chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
LOL XD

Nice
starfish saver chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
youre a sad twisted little person. haha loved it! so so so so funny! heeh i'll never look at chip packets in the same way.

very clever. :D

sarah xoxo
Jordanne chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
HAHAHA
TemporaryInsanity11 chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
OMG! That was so funny! I loved the ending! I wasn't expecting it to be a chip bag if you know what i mean!
Novelist Girl chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
You had me going, a chip bag, man alive... sick and twisted mind, but the ending made me laugh so, good job.
Redfoxfan chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
You have one sick, and twisted mind. Even though, I must say, great job! You really fooled me! Hahaha, I just watched, The Trusth be Gold last night, so my mind is EXTREMELY twisted right now. I really was thinking that they were actually doing what I thought. Hehehe. Great job! Lol!
Jodirium chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
Haha... I honestly have to say you made me blush and shake my head in wonder at my own twisted imagination. Thanks for that.
Fanpire101 chapter 1 . 7/16/2006
Okay, you REALLY had me going there! That was a pretty funny ending!