Poor Chris. I enjoyed this story!

At Least Leo Is Trying. Good Attempted Bonding Story

Woah. Intense, angsty, and charged with emotion and serious undertones. Friggin fantastic. I really adore this - too many Leo-Chris stories are silly and light and sappy. Everyone seems to forget the mistrust and the murder and every dark thing that Chris had to do. Man, you nailed this flawlessly.

Chris and Leo were my favorite part of charmed. I really enjoyed this story. Is that the end or are you going to continue this?

Well I have to say it was very good and would like ti read more about Leo and Chris.

Hey I just found and read this one it is really good...I love it and hope you write more on it...I am going to read chapter two now.

Of all the typos, this one takes the cake, "screamed, or just plain loose it." I believe you meant lost it. The story is so much better when there are no typos or grammatical errors. This story sounds promising, but those errors ruin it. Lose and loose have two different meanings.

This is my favourite part of the series. I always liked the father son issues between Leo and Chris. Good work!

That was better than part one... Alot better.

Very cool fic! I loved the way Chris acted around Leo.

I love it. Please write more.

kool

This is a really really good story i like chris he kind of has the middle child syndrome besides the fact the hes the youngest its great how you expressed both of them there so in character which i love keep up the writing

ciao maltese-princess

aw that was so sweet! really well done

This was as good, if not better, than the last one. I also enjoyed the fact that Leo hates raisins- an odd thing that he and Chris have in common. I'm off to read the next.