| Reviews for Birthday Surprise |
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   The.Black.Star2.0 chapter 1 . 1/14/2014 So amazing! More is what I shall read! |
| The.Black.Star2.0 chapter 13 . 9/29/2013 I like |
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 13 . 6/26/2011 Pretty good story |
| Yugioash chapter 13 . 2/3/2009 get to the next chapter already |
| kimiko77 chapter 13 . 9/6/2008 aww this story is so cute. i hope the twins come soon cuz i cant wait to find out how that turns out. |
| Mysterious Smiles chapter 13 . 1/15/2008 i love this story! yay Nejiten, Kibahina, stupid naruto, SasuSaku, ShikaIno! |
| TENTEN FOREVER chapter 13 . 11/22/2007 YOUR STORY RULES!I LOVE NEJITEN!YOU KNOW YOU SHOULD MAKE HER HAVE THE TWINS IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!I LUV HOW NEJI CALLS HER ...NARUTOS A RETARD IN YOU MAKE HIM MORE ...LIKE HE IS IN THE SHOW.I MEAN A LITTLE MORE SERIOUS.I REALLY AM NOT TOO FOND OF HINATA AND KIBA SO...SORRY...BUT MAN NEJI AND TENTENS BABIES WILL BE SO CUTE!I LUV YOU! |
| Lunaxandra chapter 13 . 11/18/2007 i cant wait for the next chapter |
| kibahina.4.evur chapter 13 . 8/16/2007 i liked this but...it lacked kibahina...can you pwetty pweese have more kibahina...anywayz this story is absolutely coolness so... All NarutoFMA chars:PLEASE UPDATE SOON. |
| Kid Al chapter 13 . 8/5/2007 nice |
| ShadowCatsKey chapter 13 . 8/1/2007 Aw, it's still cute! hehe, i love how you have Neji say 'Tenshi'- adorable! |
| Insanity-Hime chapter 13 . 7/20/2007 I love this story Please Update Soon! . |
| xroyal.momonessx chapter 13 . 7/20/2007 gr8 story! cant wait bout tentens n nejis kids! o ino and shikamaru too! hehe shino n the advertisements r hilarious! naruto, yes sumtimes i do worry bout him but he has a serious side. lol. sasuke n tomatoes, him n naruto...sigh. update soon! |
| ashgal19 chapter 13 . 7/19/2007 YAY it finally updated YIPEE i can't wait for it to update again (hopefully sooner and not a year from now) anyway good story update soon *ashgal19* |
| Rukia Chan9 chapter 1 . 7/19/2007 Its good, but pretty much through the entire thing, whenever someone talked you always say - She said, he said... you need to put things like -he whispered, he yelled, she exclaimed. That adds emotion in the story. |
