I’m partly reviewing just cause of the description at the bottom. I really like this! It’s really adorable and funny

Cute

So sweet!

B-bb bald? AAAAAAhhhhh! Oh, by the way, your story was awesome!

Oh Merlin indeed

HAHAHAHA

Such a cute story!

Please don't shave my head my new hairstyle already murders people..Man if look could kill.
Anyway it was really good,Also the gunk,what type

LOVE

love it!x100

Uber funny! But also emotional and i feel sad for James. Damned nicely written girl! Way to go

It is fantastic and I love your writing and how you write for Lily. I love her extensive vocabulary and that she has names for everything. I love it all.

Okay, okay! I'll review... after that paintball comment I felt the sudden urge to come to the comment box as soon as possible lol I love this writing and it definitely is funny and sweet. English is my favorite subject so I definitely appreciate you making this world a better place... at least for me. :)

Of course she really wanted James to keep on kissing
Her without a thought to everyone looking at them
Lily's finally admitted she's in love with him it's a
Time for rejoicing so let's throw the biggest party
Hog warts has seen.i was getting very fed up with
Lily's goody goody two shoes act and James isn't as
Bad either he knows how to enjoy life so when he
Finally shut her up in the loveliest way it worked
Actually their tipsy Turvey love story is the most
Magically memorable one from hog warts as they
Didn't come together overnight which made it
More thoroughly inspirational yer
Also truly magnificent writing deserves fifty thousand
Gold stars plus accolades thank skinner

Honestly she ought to call him by his first name its
Totally an exceptional one which suits him it's only
Polite although lily didn't really mind being stuck in
The broom closet she's just scared of something yet
I'm hoping everything works out for doesn't
Hate her its attempting to bring this stubborn couple
Together wake up and smell the roses James knew this
Before fifth year I've never known any redhead making
So many stupid decisions about her true love were
Usually very smart. Your exceptionally a very talented
Writer whom has a unique spin on this crazy marvellous
Love story about two favourites thank you so much.
All the best Elizabeth skinner

Lily would never have made a good nun she loves
James to much plus the excitement of having him
Chase her for so long it's not meant to be anyway
Why should she James is an absolute sweetheart
His wooing could be less frenetic except it's his unique
always thought around their fifth year lily
Should've lightened up and not been so repressed
Or stitched up its so unlike any redhead to hold a
Grudge .ypuve written a truly wonderful story with
Such great humor I'm laughing very hard trying to
Read this brilliance but I'll get there loving it. Elizabeth
Skinner