That ending made it perfect

You should continue this, I seriously love this story you're an awesome writer your stories are long, though this one need to be completed.
As kyuubi said naruto could get pregnant so that would made a good "skull" for the story, maybe adding more chaps as you choose it could be. A long story with some angst like having trouble with bringing the child(s), some bad people wanting them, etc,
Or just a love story explaining the birth and how it finished it would be awesome if you could do that, thanks for writing this awesome story.

This was good. It kept my attention and it was really well written.

That was damn sexy. Yup. No other words are really necessary.

~Rose

Nice story, love it very sweet.

LOL! Jiraiya! xDD

That was really cute, and I loved the smut! ;D

Great job. (:

jiraiys is such a pervy.. too bad he's dead...

Over all I liked it, the repeated things in between paragraphs were confusing because I could not figure out who was saying it and by the end they were annoying because at that point I really didn’t care who was saying it. You should defiantly do a sequel, it would be wonderful, something about them finding out about the research and Naruto getting pregnant would be great!

it was beautiful.. :) that's all I can say.. I just got this idea of Naruto and Sasuke finding out that Jiraiya used them as research and it's f*cking hilarious.. xD umm.. yeah.. bye.. *goes away*

I love it! could this have a sequel? and show if they tried to hide their relatioship or not? and when naruto gets pregnant, and the opinion of friends and villagers? It would be really interesting if naruto were to ask sasuke to hide their realationship from villagers and then he gets pregnant, tells sasuke and they trie to hide together until the last minute?m.. well don't know if thats too much like sasuke since I know he wouldn't give a damn what others think, well anyway something like that is posible?

Ah! and do you like kakanaru? I really like it too, but there is not many people that do it... well just that write soon byebye!

this was so cool. GO SASUKE, AND YOU AS WELL! and i love that it wasn't just smut. there was love woven into there so well done that i just had to review. but i'd love to see a sequel where naruto gets pregnant all-in-all; GREAT JOB! by the way, the jiraiya part was hilarious.

You managed to make me nosebleed and cry...*thumbs up*

oh Jiraiya you naughty old fart... when they find out the shit will totally hit the fan! lol, great fic!

That story was freakin awesome. I loved it. You did a great job.