Reviews for Super Sentai World 2 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You have disgraced the name of Sentai, this fan-fic is an Insult to the sentai world, you have insulted every single true super sentai fan with this load of garbage. Please grow up young man, Disney is for little children, to put it simply EVERYONE HATES YOU, FIX IT Please find some friends, you must be very lonely if you delete this post it shows you are a coward and cannot accept the truth, this will forever be burned into your memory if you delete, YOU COWARD, LIVING IN DENIAL good day |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow.. please write a super sentai world featuring the turborangers teaming up with the previous teams from battle fever j to liveman |
![]() ![]() I'm sorry, but this is no good. You need a thesaurus for more appropriate words than just "said", and you need to actually describe the surroundings, people, attacks, weapons and so on. Your punctuation is like a child's, the tense constantly changes from first person to third person, and the script style doesn't cut it. A new paragraph must be started whenever someone new speaks. I recommend a betareader. |
![]() ![]() Nice ending! (I guess...) |
![]() ![]() Oh no! The civilians get the credit again! Reminds me of the guy who told the heroes about the eye... |
![]() ![]() Death Train? Is it a reference from FF8 or not? |
![]() ![]() All right! Kinda reminds me of the major introductions of the team members from Jetman to Fiveman! |
![]() ![]() This is a good Sentai fic! Have watched the SS movie and it was good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, I love the structure (especially how you had to add in that Abekiller was with them!). The chapters are so written like how an actually Sentai episode would lay itself out. This story is soemthing a Sentai fan can really enjoy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You did this before Eiji became BoukenSilver? Now that was a fatal flaw in that if you did it after Task 20, you could have tossed in a whole slew of other characters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder why they never made another Super Sentai five man team-up? I guess two man team-ups are enough. Waiting for the next chapter! |