Reviews for Untamed |
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multyfangirl21 chapter 34 . 9/30/2017 Finally. Will there be a possible egg coming in the future? |
multyfangirl21 chapter 28 . 9/30/2017 Ok for the past several chapters I've wanted to slap the pair upside their heads and tell them they're idiots about how they're resisting their feelings. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 21 . 9/30/2017 Does that even count since they're both asexual? ... Even though she's not 100% what she is Will there be a small population of her people that survived extermination? I kinda want a small population to make it New Namic since the two peoples make interesting pairs. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 20 . 9/30/2017 I love it when it shows up how much Vegita and Piccolo are alike so they can figure out each other. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 she makes me think of a song , This little girl. that's the one I think of with this chapter, especially the end. I like to listen to it when i'm listening to nightcore music. |
multyfangirl19 chapter 16 . 9/30/2017 Is her people a female counter race to Piccolo's? Are they sorta a female version of Piccolo's people? |
multyfangirl21 chapter 8 . 9/29/2017 it's interesting to find am Oc x Piccolo story. as long as it's not one of the z fighters and defentally not Chichi i'm ok with it. it's just too weird for me to think of those combos. especially Picchi. I know they're both Gohan's parents but it's just much too weird for me. but I do like them in a platonic relationship , perhaps Piccolo as a back up breadwinner for the family or living with the Son family. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 5 . 9/29/2017 what Dende implied and how Piccolo reacted makes me wonder about the thoughts going through his head about his surrogate son's mother |
multyfangirl21 chapter 4 . 9/29/2017 aww Dende has a sister now. this will be interesting to see the young kami having a powerful sibling. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 3 . 9/29/2017 that reaction that Piccolo had is hilarious and something I can see him reacting like. he does have a way with children so i'm not so surprised the he now has a girl clinging to him. |
FangLup chapter 34 . 9/29/2016 Thanks for sharing. I liked it. |
Uchiha33 chapter 34 . 6/12/2016 I absolutely love this story! I've been looking for one like this and it's perfect! Piccolo rocks! Thank you for your amazing writing. |
love Piccolo chapter 34 . 8/6/2014 great story it had me in tears ;) |
NoFlexZoneBetch101 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 OH my gosh this seems like a good story and can't wait to read further |
NoFlexZoneBetch101 chapter 34 . 6/24/2014 OH MY GOSH THIS WAS A GOOD ASS STORY AND NICE ENDING PLAYED OFF |